|Reviews for All at Once|
| Lisa Cooper chapter 24 . 2/8/2015
Excellent job with your story. You have a properly light touch with necessary humorous situation such as World War III breaking out inthe conference room. I know there is more story to come after chapter 24, but I noticed you haven't finished this story. IF you have the time and interest, it would be very interesting to see how you finish off- the com mentor'so anxiety is being held off by past laughter from the story. THANK YOU.
| Lisa Cooper chapter 6 . 2/6/2015
In the last couple days in 2015 I've just come across, "All At Once". It's a treasure; it has some substance to it that makes some sense. Two examples of the substance I like are one, how magic in this realm works, and two the ideas behind how one would make a potion. I also enjoyed your comparisons to cooking and Chemistry. Professor Snape's opinion about Harry Potter makes sense considering Snape's and Potter's history, but I'd love to see what Professor Snape would think if he could hear his questions about potion making, chemistry, and cooking. (You may have coveredit in later chapters, I just haven't got there yet. Harry is also seventeen, and can process these things in a higher level of thought. He's applying and comparing, at least, which student's younger than he probably couldn't have because their minds aren't developed that way yet and they don't know as much as Harry as learned in all his years of education. Thanks for making me think, and begin to take apart Harry Potter as a student in your world, which you have developed at least somewhat.) Your story is very enjoy able for the reasons I have mentioned, and more. (I'm not sure if there is time enough, or I have the knowledge to know what other things to specifically complement you on.) Thank you for writing it.
| Jade Dagger chapter 38 . 1/13/2015
"review and lemme know I'm still remembered"
You're still remembered! I come back to this one every now and then for a reread. It's a fave. This thing still have a chance after seven years?
| Silvis chapter 39 . 1/6/2015
An update would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
| HonorGuard Ra chapter 39 . 12/6/2014
Aww, no update in years... Is this dead?
| taxzombie chapter 39 . 11/26/2014
Yet another tale that has fallen to dust of time. I'll leave it as a follows in the hope that someday it may yet come back to life.
| Linzerj chapter 10 . 11/10/2014
*happy tears of joy*
Best AU I ever stumbled upon thus far...brilliant, perfectly absolutely brilliant!
| yespadfoot chapter 39 . 10/29/2014
I'm so sad to see that this hasn't been updated again. It is my first muggle!harry (at the beginning) fic and I completely love it. it was perfect. 3
| jonski chapter 4 . 10/25/2014
Good chapter. I hate that canon ignores the mugle technology.
| Mikee chapter 38 . 10/1/2014
I've just finished re-re-reading the story and I STILL love it. I so hope you'll continue it soon. I couldn't post this on chapter 39 since I've already commented on that chapter before.
| Arashi - IV of VI chapter 39 . 8/16/2014
This was an absolutely amazing fanfiction! Quite brilliant! :D
Can't wait to see what happens next! (As well as what they write in the paper!)
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 39 . 8/12/2014
I'm not entirely sure I like where this is going, but I like the characters and the AU you put them in. It's well-written as well, something I find quite rare these days. I hope you'll update though, as I'm curious about where this will go. It's kind of interesting how easily they took down voldemort (or maybe they didn't really, I don't know). I always wondered why there was so much fanfair about it when it could be as simple as one slipping the other a form of poison.
Keep up the great work! :)
| HEKSIE chapter 39 . 8/8/2014
HOPE TO SEE SOME MORE UPDATES. LOVE TE FIC
| Teagrannymcmlxiii chapter 39 . 7/23/2014
I found your story and read it start to current ending in 2 sessions, ( a girl has to have a job you know) I noticed it had last been updated in 2008. As it is 2014 and July, I was wondering if you were going to finish the rest of the story or... ? No, I am Not a Story Adopter, I am a voracious story reader and when they are not finished I get kind of sulky for a bit, it is why I usually only read Completed Stories, but the premise for this one intrigued me, so I read it anyway.
Please continue the story, I know no-one could tell it like you do.
| ex-ellent chapter 6 . 7/14/2014
As interesting as this story is this chapter actual killed it. In canon the only reason Ran and Hermione were 'friends' was because of Harry. They have absolute nothing in common, so why are they friends here?