Reviews for Forlorn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ...why did natural not just send a shadow clone to them? |
![]() ![]() I think Haku likes older women |
![]() ![]() Lmao what is going on with Sato’s life |
![]() ![]() Sato’s pretty cool |
![]() ![]() "Good!" What a little shit, cute! |
![]() ![]() "It was only a bit of sparring between friends, what could happen?" Chapter 8 - The Uchiha Massacre ._. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s true that Haku has no training in his Hyoton bloodline as he spent his time in Konoha. Did he even know that he had ice powers ? It’s gonna be interesting to see how Wave plays out |
![]() ![]() For everyone saying Sasuke didn't get the cursed seal from Oro-pedo: you're wrong, please read again. Also it kind of makes sense for Haku to get the seal too. Oro-pedo likes too collect rare kekkei genkai and jutsu; Juugo, Suigetsu, Karin, Sound Four, etc. I don't agree with Haku not telling Jiraya about the seal (seems ooc) but I'm not too bothered by it. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haku and Tenten is such a nice pairing ! Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfectly handled ! You found flaws for all three to work on and I’ve got to say, this Sakura seems awesome ! Now we’re just missing Sasuke, to know how he’s doing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sad chapter but with a really heartfelt ending ! Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn... at least Sasuke will still Sakura as a friend as you wrote about her face engraving in his mind. That’s good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that the presence of Haku and Gaara will be a good effect on Naruto and change him from his usual obnoxious attitude. They should at least have an effect on him. And if Sakura and Hinata are also there too, hopefully Naruto will less insufferable |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s awesome that Sakura’s gonna be in the group ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That’s gonna be an awesome team |