|Reviews for Forlorn|
| Calypto chapter 16 . 10/23/2017
how does it make sense for haku to not trll jiraya about the mark?
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/31/2017
Super powered OC? Goodbye.
| ta.shrivastava chapter 30 . 2/27/2017
The only thing that I don't like in the story is that too much romance in there. And they are not even teenagers yet, they all are swooning over each other.
| ta.shrivastava chapter 17 . 2/22/2017
This was the largest chapter in the entire story. It goes like this; you began with the fairly sized chapters, to then large chapters, and now extremely large chapters!
| ta.shrivastava chapter 14 . 2/21/2017
I see change in gara's personality. It started from the wave, but wasn't noticeable before, but it is increasingly obvious.
| ta.shrivastava chapter 2 . 2/20/2017
I have to say, soundtracks for chapters is so great.
| ta.shrivastava chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
an interesting plot. I am thankful that haku is not girl in this story.
| thekrillinator chapter 28 . 8/4/2016
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/25/2016
a gary stu oc. your naruto is a selfish bastard for some reason, pray tell why do 11- 13 years olds ALL have a pairing!? one or non would be more realistic.
decent plot but too much romance for people so young.
again with the gary stu. and a mary sue as well.
| FaolenBookWolf chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
This story is interesting. I think I'll read the whole thing.
| dyew14 chapter 23 . 9/6/2015
Very good, keep it up
| dreaddragonknight chapter 30 . 8/31/2015
good story, good writing, thank u 4 all the enjoyment i have gained from this story
| dreaddragonknight chapter 27 . 8/30/2015
wow, just wow
| dreaddragonknight chapter 16 . 8/29/2015
i feel haku would have told jiraiya
| dreaddragonknight chapter 15 . 8/28/2015
nice, but i still like the cannon version the best