Reviews for Forlorn
Guest chapter 28 . 1/31
I think Haku likes older women
Guest chapter 14 . 1/30
Lmao what is going on with Sato’s life
Guest chapter 11 . 1/30
Sato’s pretty cool
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30
"Good!"

What a little shit, cute!
Sussy baka chapter 7 . 5/31/2021
"It was only a bit of sparring between friends, what could happen?"
Chapter 8 - The Uchiha Massacre ._.
TheWateringWizard chapter 12 . 1/6/2021
It’s true that Haku has no training in his Hyoton bloodline as he spent his time in Konoha. Did he even know that he had ice powers ?

It’s gonna be interesting to see how Wave plays out
Guest chapter 16 . 1/4/2021
For everyone saying Sasuke didn't get the cursed seal from Oro-pedo: you're wrong, please read again.
Also it kind of makes sense for Haku to get the seal too. Oro-pedo likes too collect rare kekkei genkai and jutsu; Juugo, Suigetsu, Karin, Sound Four, etc. I don't agree with Haku not telling Jiraya about the seal (seems ooc) but I'm not too bothered by it.
Keep up the good work
TheWateringWizard chapter 11 . 1/4/2021
Haku and Tenten is such a nice pairing ! Love it
TheWateringWizard chapter 10 . 1/4/2021
Perfectly handled ! You found flaws for all three to work on and I’ve got to say, this Sakura seems awesome ! Now we’re just missing Sasuke, to know how he’s doing.
TheWateringWizard chapter 9 . 1/4/2021
Such a sad chapter but with a really heartfelt ending ! Loved it
TheWateringWizard chapter 8 . 1/2/2021
Damn... at least Sasuke will still Sakura as a friend as you wrote about her face engraving in his mind. That’s good
TheWateringWizard chapter 7 . 1/2/2021
I hope that the presence of Haku and Gaara will be a good effect on Naruto and change him from his usual obnoxious attitude. They should at least have an effect on him. And if Sakura and Hinata are also there too, hopefully Naruto will less insufferable
TheWateringWizard chapter 6 . 1/2/2021
It’s awesome that Sakura’s gonna be in the group !
TheWateringWizard chapter 5 . 1/2/2021
That’s gonna be an awesome team
TheWateringWizard chapter 4 . 1/2/2021
Such a nice chapter ! I love how everyone is meeting
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