Reviews for Forlorn
thekrillinator chapter 28 . 8/4
Guest chapter 15 . 2/25
a gary stu oc. your naruto is a selfish bastard for some reason, pray tell why do 11- 13 years olds ALL have a pairing!? one or non would be more realistic.
decent plot but too much romance for people so young.
again with the gary stu. and a mary sue as well.
youre delulu
FaolenBookWolf chapter 1 . 2/19
This story is interesting. I think I'll read the whole thing.
dyew12 chapter 23 . 9/6/2015
Very good, keep it up
dreaddragonknight chapter 30 . 8/31/2015
good story, good writing, thank u 4 all the enjoyment i have gained from this story
dreaddragonknight chapter 27 . 8/30/2015
wow, just wow
dreaddragonknight chapter 16 . 8/29/2015
i feel haku would have told jiraiya
dreaddragonknight chapter 15 . 8/28/2015
nice, but i still like the cannon version the best
dreaddragonknight chapter 14 . 8/28/2015
oh dear god...we r all doomed
dreaddragonknight chapter 12 . 8/27/2015
i am liking the changes from cannon, good work
dreaddragonknight chapter 9 . 8/27/2015
i am gonna guess and say they r gonna be better than cannon thanks 2 this early special training and all
dreaddragonknight chapter 5 . 8/26/2015
um should they be learning this stuff at 6? i mean in cannon at least naruto learned this stuff at like 12?unless it is explained later on or comes into play with them learning sooner then never mind
dreaddragonknight chapter 3 . 8/26/2015
dawww, also i want to castrate some people 4 being dicks
dyew12 chapter 8 . 8/22/2015
Very good so far, keep it up
My-name-is-a-drug-legit chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Okay, I will review properly at the end of this chapter, but i just quickly wanted to laugh a little. I often check out the review before reading a story, and I noticed a rather nonsensical comment that read 'that poor dog', but then I just had to read the first sentence of this chapter, and read the chapter title before nearly falling over laughing when I remembered aku's reather moody treatment of 'that poor dog'. I didn't laugh when I first read that scene in the manga, but now, looking back on it, it was hilerious considering the circumstances. 'Oh, I'm an adorable little boy, struggling to survive, with a sweet and cute disposition an- OH HELL NO BITCH, THAT'S MY FOOD!'
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