Reviews for Forlorn
R8886 chapter 6 . 1/20
OMG! YOU MADE A LORD OF THE FLIES REFERENCE!
rock johnson chapter 9 . 12/6/2014
Im sensing some future conflict between Gaara and Sasuke for Sakura's heart. they both seem rather fond of her... wink wink.
GenetiX23 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
That poor dog : (
AncientDoom chapter 5 . 10/29/2014
ah yes, the old fashoined tree-water test.
and haku nails it.
Darklordcomp chapter 6 . 5/13/2014
ALL ABOARD THE KOREAN HYPE TRAIN
N Harmonic chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Ah! No zabuza?!
CrystalBud chapter 30 . 12/9/2013
I love this story :D
Publicola chapter 3 . 12/2/2013
I really like this. No superfluous angst, no mobs screaming "kill the demon!", just peer pressure and parent-enforced isolation slowly but surely working to drive a kid away from everything he'd ever known. Only difference from canon, really, is the lack of involvement by the Hokage, and that's easily hand-waved as him simply being too busy. Wonder where Danzo was, though; not sure if it matters, but he is a bit of a war-monger.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/23/2013
You had orochimaru bite haku, no, fuck you!
I'm Naruto Dude chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
AWESOME
sierra chapter 30 . 1/3/2013
I got interested in the story again. It was breath taking I can't wait to read the sequel!
sierra chapter 14 . 1/3/2013
I like your story but I somehow lost intrest in it ( probably because I was reading it 8 hours straight). I might come back and read it later but the point is I love your story.
Wandering Bard chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
please Redo this chap it still has some minor grammatical errors
R chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Why keep chapter hostages? It just completely kills any desire I had to read this story...
Guest chapter 10 . 7/29/2012
like the chapter
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