|Reviews for Forlorn|
| sierra chapter 30 . 1/3/2013
I got interested in the story again. It was breath taking I can't wait to read the sequel!
| sierra chapter 14 . 1/3/2013
I like your story but I somehow lost intrest in it ( probably because I was reading it 8 hours straight). I might come back and read it later but the point is I love your story.
| Wandering Bard chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
please Redo this chap it still has some minor grammatical errors
| R chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Why keep chapter hostages? It just completely kills any desire I had to read this story...
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/29/2012
like the chapter
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/28/2012
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/28/2012
| GlitterVan chapter 30 . 5/1/2012
I just finish reading this wonderful story and I any wait for the next part of it. I noticed that in ur note that the sequel to the story will be published in 2008 And since I just started reading ur Story in 2012 idk what happen to the story because I can't find it anywhere. I jut hope that you didn't abandoned the story because you are one of the few authors that can actually write. So please continue your hard works . Thank you D
| Chewie Cookies chapter 30 . 3/19/2012
Awesome. And now, for Harbinger!
| Chewie Cookies chapter 11 . 3/12/2012
So, then, is the beating Lee will be getting courtesy of Neji, or Haku?
| Stina Whatever chapter 30 . 2/14/2012
This is a great stoyr, and I really like that even though, in this, Haku is not a loyal follower of Zabuza's, Zabuza still plays a part in his life
| MC-GAR-IL chapter 30 . 1/25/2012
this story was EPIC! funny how i was looking for a naruhina fanfic and came across this master piece
i love team 2 it just seemed so right having naruto garra and haku on the same team and being best friends
during the whole story i felt all my emotions come out happiness, anger, frustration, and tiredness (from lack of sleep)
even though the chapters were long it was okay because the chapters epicness distracted me from it
even how you changed some details fom the original was done very well it just seemed so natural like this is how naruto was meant to be
i appreciate the fact you let naruto learn more moves when he was younger because when he only knew the shadow clone move was not very exciting in the show
i was very happy to hear about haku again i was sad when he died i thought that wasn't fair and when he almost died again i almost had a heart attack but when i found out he was still alive i was liike 'hell yeah haku pulls through chidori isn't taking him down this time eat it sasuke'
i fell in love with garra even more reading this he's just so cool and i'm happy he was able to deal with the shukaku quicker than before
all in all i was happy that they all weren't as lonely as they could have been in their life because they found eachother
as fo the other charecters here what i thought:
i sstill don't like sasuke he's a bastard and heartbreaker
i gained more respect for sakura than i had for her before she wasn't whiney and clingy like she was in the anime
i always knew hinata was awesome but this was just a whole new level of awesomeness that was reached
i loved your original charecters Sato seemed to just fit into the story like he was always there tama too but there's more of a mystery behind considering why she gave up being a ninja
i think this story came out so naturally it was like how naruuto was meant to be thanks for all the hard work you guys put in this can't wait to read the sequel
but first i need some sleep i've been up all night reading this and working on my own writing project so i'm gping to stop this rant before i have circles under my eyes like garra-kun
| jason chapter 13 . 11/22/2011
everyone in ur story is ooc. Cnt read it, sorry.
| eternalwhimsy chapter 30 . 8/19/2011
I love this story. It is one of the most well written story on this site. I can't wait for the sequel.
| Kur0Kishi chapter 5 . 11/27/2010
lol. 2 jinchuriki and a brilliant farmboy. epic. might as well take them as a genin team. still... naruto better gtrow a dod damned brain...