Reviews for The Mad Dog Picnic
Aronim chapter 4 . 2/29/2016
Again, cute. Fun. Ron's a saint.
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
1st chapter: emotions, drama and some romance i see in a interesting chapter and considering that Kim and Ron aready for the action, i expect a lot of action in the Chapter 2!
Ken106348 chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
the Bonnie line was a rip from Danny Phantom wasent it
Anthony1l chapter 4 . 10/21/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
Sentinel103 chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
Camy this looked very IC and was tremendously entertaining.


CrossoverFan chapter 2 . 10/3/2011
So everyone but Bonnie's dating someone they really like. Even more shocking Barkin pulled some practical jokes. Most shocking they were actually funny.
Daki92 chapter 4 . 6/7/2011
Heh, an amusing little diddy
Owennumber1fan chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
This is my favorite chapter of this story. Ron's reaction upon seeing Kim in her cheerleading outfit seems so organic; it's like "wow, I am so lucky to be dating this hot girl", which I think is the Kim/Ron relationship in a nutshell.
shana elmsford chapter 3 . 10/10/2008
how did this Get off my favs list?"

i'll put it. back on.

Michael Howard chapter 4 . 5/29/2008
Loved the bit about "another head in his cargos"!

Who says you need a villain to make an enjoyable KP fan fiction? Not me!
Michael Howard chapter 2 . 5/29/2008
This chapter's highlight: the task suited to Kim’s culinary talents.

Michael Howard chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Nice take on Bonnie here. Perfect example of why I just can't manage to hate her, no matter how mean she is to my favorite teen couple.
Samurai Crunchbird chapter 4 . 5/22/2008

That was a great conclusion.

I just wished Bonnie would get her head out of her backside (languaged sanitized) and just accept the olive branch extended to her.

From all your 'double entendre' lines you have included so far (such as 'he had another head in his cargos that was actually up to the task of doing his thinking when his brain was deprived of blood'), 'Mating Games' should be fun.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird
Samurai Crunchbird chapter 3 . 5/22/2008

Dang! Who knew KP had such a devious streak to her? Actually, it *was* established in 'Emotion Sickness'. You did, however, play it to perfection with your little 'forest' scene.

This was a lot of fun and frivolity for all concerned...except, of course, for Bonnie. I wonder how this sitch will be resolved in the next chapter.

I guess there is only one way to find out...

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird
Samurai Crunchbird chapter 2 . 5/22/2008

Hmm...Cheerleader revelations, Bonnie at her witchiest (language sanitized), Ron standing up to Kim, and KP wanting to shed some of her workload.

Take me home, Lord...I have seen everything!

That is, until I read your last line. I whole-heartedly agreed with the last two sentences in particular...'And if you absolutely insist on drinking and driving, please, at the very least, keep your car out of my living room. I’d appreciate it. Thank you.'

It's time to move to Chapter 3...

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird
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