|Reviews for Mysteries|
| Savendia chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
You write so beautifully. I love your Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon, they always have just the right amounts of mushy adorableness without going too far, and they are always so very in-character.
The last line is wonderfully sweet. If I had to choose a favorite part, that would probably be it... But the entire thing was so stunningly written that I don't want to choose just one part as a favorite!
| Celadrian chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Omigosh, you're back! And with more absolutely adorable work. Poor Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, always blaming themselves for everything...
Anyway, it's great to have you back writing. Dare we hope for an update soonish in The Unchosen? I've been suffering from QuiObi fluff-withdrawal lately; don't vanish again!
| ally127 chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
aww... :3 that was so beautifully written!
| Ann Jinn chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
Your story is so touching. I loved the comparison of Obi Wan as a little birdling. How Aui Gon came to finally understand their differences and to honor them was so well done.
| i luv ewansmile chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
Aw, that was so sweet. Very uniquely and lovenly portrayed. Gah, *claps* well done!
| amber75 chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
That was very sweet. You always capture scenes and emotions so well. It's so good to read more of your stuff!
| Katy chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
Your description was very good, especially at the begining. I really like how Qui-Gon began to appreciate what Obi-Wan likes, and vice versa. The end made me say "aw".
| charie chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
| Phoenix Red Lion chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
So beautiful and deep. I love the relationship you show between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan...makes me hate the ending of Episode 1 even more. *pouts*
I love the visionary in your story...especially the parts about the moon. Very similar to my own feelings of night which made this story especially meaningful to me.
| trecebo chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
You always have a unique perspective and hey, the style is cool too. Very descriptive to boot.
| Katieelessar chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
This was absolutely gorgeous, May. I loved the style, the idea, ah! Just everything was perfect as usual. Great job!
| Writer117 chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
Mm, love it.