|Reviews for Luna's Hubby|
| deator11 chapter 21 . 13h ago
Wow. I just finished this whole thing. It was incredible. I loved it, and this is coming from someone that normally doesn't ship Harry/Luna. Kuddos to you. I can tell you worked very hard on this. So thank you! It was very much enjoyed :)
| Drifter950 chapter 21 . 3/13
(Grin) You know, I think I really like the name of Harry Lovegood. It has a nice ring to it.
I enjoyed interaction between the students, with each known character expanding in directions never found in cannon.
Sad to say, I have never liked Dunbledore from book one on. JKR just had him doing just to much behind the scene’s controlling, and ignoring to many responsibilities that he does not have time for (like checking on those who are, supposedly, his wards (ie: Harry) ). And, in spite of his age, or maybe because of, when he makes a decision, anything that does not agree with him, is wrong! Meaning, I like your version!
I do look forward to seeing what else you do with the team of H & L Lovegood, their friends and support group.
Again, thank you for a fun, and very interesting story.
May the MUSE always be with youi!
| desfelidrayahoo chapter 5 . 3/7
Your story is really good, but I feel the need to inform you about something in chapter 5. The cleaning kit would NOT be linseed oil and a cloth. a cloth with linseed oil on it can combust without spark. Other good oils for woodworking are mineral oil and tung oil. Mineral oil is completely foodsafe (direct ingestion is a OTC anti-constipation treatment) and all but odorless and colorless. Tung oil has a stronger smell and dries a little yellow. Also, pet peeve of mine, if you're going to have Harry's wand still be Holly, holly is a white wood. very very white. My husband and I are woodworkers
| CatGirl04 chapter 17 . 3/8
I'm sorry but Luna is hurt and Harry should grovel to her. What she did is not a joking matter, and now Harry is in danger. Harry could be killed being in this tournament, sometimes, I think Luna needs to realize that not everything will go her way. Where is Luna's remorse for doing something so stupid. I've loved this story up to now, but that just bugs.
| Kaya70 chapter 21 . 3/5
Wow this is a little crazy story
| royslady51 chapter 6 . 3/3
Well, Time can...actually...if you're riding with the Doctor...though if Harry keeps mucking around with Time spells like that...might get the TARDIS' attention. Which could be fun, actually as long as you're not using a 'modern' Doctor. 2nd, 4th, 5th or 7th Doctors would be a better match for Harry than the newer ones.
| Luke Dragneel chapter 14 . 2/22
I am sad that Hermione in this story didn't realize what would happen if she went about telling people that Harry Lovegood was really Harry Potter. Hopefully she will realize the ramifications before going through with it, though I think the Goblet will be the big announcer for the world.
| Mionefan chapter 5 . 2/10
I'm really liking this story, but I have to say that "Larry" Lovegood is Xenophilius Lovegood in canon. Most people call him Xeno. Everything else seems to relate to canon, so that just sticks out. The cup they retrieved from the cave was supposed to be the fake locket, so you've changed that, but it's good. Less of a problem than getting it from Bella's vault at Gringotts.
| Abderan Sophist chapter 21 . 2/4
Overall a very good story! Engaging, with highly sympathetic characters. Some Harry Potter fanfics have characters who are excessively stubborn, pointlessly malicious and mind-numbingly stupid (and there is a little of that in canon); I take it that this is some sort of reaction against that? It had kind of a "Harry Potter: Friendship is Magic" feel. I admit to sometimes feeling you went too far the other way, making a lot of the characters (apart from Dumbledore and the few villains) too sensible and cooperative, with the end result being the rather easy-seeming defeat of the Dark Lord. Luna also seemed a bit over-powered, but I do like the character and think she got too little attention in canon, so I didn't mind too much.
| doubledamn chapter 21 . 2/2
This was fantastic, worth of Rorschach's Blot himself and far surpassing J.K Rowling's work. Well done, if you're going to do any more expansions on R.B's Odd Ideas can I suggest either '124. My India' (haven't seen one where Harry is raised in India before) OR '133. Dungeons 'n Drow (it's just awesome, you know it is) OR finally, '142. Under The Gaze of the Necromancer' (read it, love it and remember, "it's not spoken of").
Great story, will definitely re-read at some later point.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26
Luna shows initiative
| KomodoClassic chapter 8 . 1/24
This is excellent! I love Luna, and your Luna is fantastic.
Having Luna be the one to talk down the snake is a great idea! And that's exactly how it would happen, too!
Also, this line: "Do we get to use fake names? Do I have to take up knitting?"
Is that a Tale of Two Cities reference I see?
| erbkaiser chapter 21 . 1/24
A wonderful story overall and a very enjoyable read.
The AU setting allows for the very OOC Bellatrix so no criticism there, instead I'd say well done.
The only part of this story that really doesn't work is Luna entering Harry in the tournament and the resulting fight. I get that you wanted Harry in and their bond to be outed somehow but the Biblical parable you apply to get them to make up really doesn't fit.
In the adulteress case, both man and woman commit a crime. What exactly is Harry's crime? He was just helping Luna and had no idea what she was doing.
But that is the only criticism I really have.
Great story and a nice ending. A Rhinoceros animagus is rather unique, and your second and third tasks are well done.
| I3HP chapter 21 . 1/13
this story was awesome! i love the ending. you never had any plot holes or loose ends. very well written and thought out. kudos to Meteoricshipyards for a great read!
| Callwaiting chapter 12 . 1/10
I'm curious. Why couldn't Harry see them? He would still have seen his parents die, so the thestrals should have appeared to him. Shouldn't they?