Harry shouldn't have apologized. His response was tame compared to what Luna deserved for this betrayal.

Eyewitness accounts being notoriously unreliable is a very new and very modern and very Muggle opinion to have, and not one a Wizard would hold.

Especially considering Pensieves are a thing. What you recall or don't recall about something doesn't matter when you can just look at it again to make sure you're recalling correctly, and eyewitness testimony itself isn't needed when eyewitness memories can be played for all to see.

if a wife can enter a husband into a binding magical contract... what's to stop narcissa from signing a contract with Sirius in place of Lucius, that would make Lucius give all his worldly possessions to Sirius or die? having someone have the power to bind you to any contract is so contrived it's imbecilic.

so. Luna decides to steal a car, doesn't tell harry about it, brings him along, when she can't open the door, asks him to do it and the drives full speed at him. he ends un in the hospital and doctors say he might die in 3 weeks. that's a Muggle way of essentially the same thing happening. and somehow LUNA is the victim? their relationship was already iffy at times, with her belittling him needlessly and always being "in the right". but this one takes the cake. I've read some bad fanfics in my time, but this one... yeah, I don't want to get ruder than I've been so I'll just stop.

Perfect !

You can tell this fic was written before the release of the seven book because Dumbledore is still the benevolent old man without flaws and Snape is still portrayed as a traitor.

Just imaginie the face of the most powerful dark lord, heir of Salazar Slytherin coild make if he discovers that his horcrux protected with his oh so powerful wards were beated by two seven years old kids with a household spell while playing pirate treasure hunting.

This is priceless.

Thank you my dear friend for the story, it's been a journey. I know it's free and you don't make money of this, but I just hope you are okay wherever you are...
Thank you for not killing most character like that woman did...
I can't believe she still put HP series as children book with all hearth break she put there...
Thank you once again, you give me a story that I believe it's supposed end better this way... thank you

Killed by a rhino. Gotta be the best Tommy boy death I've ever read.

I love this story.

Wow man, what a chapter... I know Bellatrix not evil in here, but wow what a chapter...
Bellatrix love Jim really nice touch.. I really hope Bellatrix scene in shringking shack could be longer, but I really satisfied with it. Her interactions with Neville makes me think about navile take her as a aunt... It's sad how she turns out... Hope she gets better.
And with luna whisper... I think harry can fly out from tunnel because of it... Love it
And remus werewolf... Very nice... Nicely done

Well, do I sense liz have crush on harry? Hehehehhe... I will found out soon enough.
The harry and luna fight is nice.. I understand that we need conflicts to make it more interesting, but I really hope they can be playful like when they are kids

Wait a minute, that child. Is it a reference from the green children that found in the forest? I heard that story, pretty creepy if you ask me

This was a delightful story. I read the whole thing in just a couple days and I enjoyed the entire experience. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Huh, thank you for not let luna mom died. I'm about to stop reading when I get to the dying part.

"Eyewitness accounts are notoriously inaccurate."

In a world where you can look at someone's memories with perfect accuracy...?