|Reviews for Entanglement|
| machievelli chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Supposed to have been posted 7 January 2012, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. but I had problems with my computer that literally made every document and link hidden, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'.
Then to make me even more like a buttermilk biscuit (more flaky) my computer went down again in June of 2012 with yet another virus. So this is even later...
TSL aboard Ebon Hawk: Bao Dur and the Exile remember the steps that led from the war to Malachor V.
The piece is very introspective from both points of view. Each forged in the fires of war, and made them inseparable.
| Revan's Pet Duck chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
Interesting, well-written, unexpected, and a great idea. Wonderful job.
| Dranzen chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
All of your fics seem are very emotional, very deep. They are the kind of stories that keep people entranced, set the reader into a daze.
Once again, you amaze me with your creative genius.