Reviews for Sushi XIII
animearlinefreak chapter 7 . 10/29/2009
this is an awsome story and I really hope you update this soon! I love that Demyx and Axel were an item and their behavior in the present time is extremly funny! Again looking forward to reading more of this story soon!
liliukani chapter 3 . 3/17/2009
it's not spelled "decretive"! "decretive" is not a word~

i think you were looking for "decorative"...

sorry for being a spelling nazi! it just drives me crazy
AliVal13 chapter 6 . 3/16/2009
Mew. The whole thing seemed fine to me, but at the end it seemed a bit like you were in a hurry. O.o Not because it went off track story-wise, but because you accidentally melded what looks like an Axel and Demyx sentence together as one. xD

Bah. Still better then me by a mile.

Anyway, oh noes! Bigger Plot! Can't wait. ;3
Sea MoonDragon chapter 6 . 11/24/2008
Oh, take your time then _ Quality writing takes time. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update though!
Nirvanic-s chapter 6 . 11/20/2008
Aw, damn, that sucks. I know how you feel. D8 But, the story you've been doing right now is freaking awesome. I mean, I like the little cameos and the word choice is brilliant. Good plot, I haven't seen it before.
Melodious Authoress chapter 5 . 11/19/2008
Geez, Demyx sure was rude... but ha! Sora's here too!
Melodious Authoress chapter 4 . 11/19/2008
Daw, I just love this story!
Melodious Authoress chapter 3 . 11/19/2008
lol, Axel called it a BANJO! lmao! That was pretty funny.
Melodious Authoress chapter 2 . 11/19/2008
Heh, how amusing.
Melodious Authoress chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
How very interesting. I shall read more now.
Kirii chapter 6 . 11/19/2008
Perfectly understandable. It's happened to everyone at some point. XD;; Take your time working on it! I look forward to reading the next chapter when you get it done!

~Kirii
The Mad Empty Shell chapter 5 . 10/11/2007
This fic kix butt! would be cool if u continue...
AliVal13 chapter 4 . 11/22/2006
Ch. 4 Yes, I am reviewing this again. XD I didn't know I never reviewed this one...

Ah well, anyway I was re-reading the fic (Yes, I am a little obsessed with it even though it's old) and I just randomly puhed the review thing (honestly, it's a huge habit ) and well, here I am!

Anyway, you'll probably never get this, but... great job on the fic. It wasn't long and lasted, what, 21 days? LOL But I still love it.

It's something amusing to read when all these other writers like to make Axel a bastarding whore, Roxas an ass wipe, etc...

*sighs* 5 out of 13 chapters. Ah well. Something is better then nothing, right?
demikkusu chapter 5 . 8/27/2006
the relationship between demyx/axel is quite amusing. o

:o *flail* update please!
AliVal13 chapter 5 . 7/28/2006
My review for this story was erased? How did that happen? O_o

Ah, well. Anyway, you know how much I like this chapter and my small opinions on it. :P Another reminder-Awesome stuff!
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