|Reviews for Eclipse of the Sky|
| yeolover chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
| goodbyegoodnight chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
I have read many stories on this site and actually like the oc. It can realistically cause change and lead to a new and excitinglly new twist to storys we all know.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
your 10 paragraph rant has caused me to lose all interest in your story. Just some advice readers don't like being ranted at in the first chapter of a fic about a character you haven't introduced yet
| Shadow Sorceress chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
It's exciting to see this story up and running again. In the time between Quizilla and finding you here, I've gone from a high school student to a graduate student. It's clear that you've had some major life changes as well, and I hope you're doing well. If you do manage to get back to Eclipse of the Sky again, you'll definitely have a very grateful reader. I appreciate clear communication in storytelling, and your stories are examples of storytelling at its best, in my opinion.
Please keep writing!
| ramenlover12050 chapter 39 . 9/10/2012
I love your story! Please update it because I can't wait
until I find out what happens with Harry and Kally.
| Master Bombadil chapter 39 . 7/10/2012
I'm glad I found this story again, and to see most parties made it through the battles intact. I assume Ron's shouting had something to do with Viktor, I can only imagine the arguments he will now have against 'fraternizing with the enemy.'
| mimilover chapter 39 . 3/4/2012
And so for the first time in my loooong fanfiction reading career, I'm writing a review! you should feel special (well you are special considering you kept reminding me that i was being an asshole to not show appreciation, which is wat other writers also did, but they only mentioned their own story) so yeah! but anyhow, this is a seriously awesome fanfiction. And im not saying that
cuz i love oc's, which I do, but I love how wel written its is in terms of scentence build up and scene play and character development and stuff ,cuz there are other awesome story ideas out there but if they cant put their words on paper properly, its kind of a no go. At least, thats my problem XD. not saying my ideas are awesome of c. Im rambling. gonna stop now. Anyway i love your story, i love writing skills, I love your oc and i love harry. (him going all dark like is waking up the fangirl inside of me) I hope you will expand on the whole Animagus thing, cuz I have always wanted harry to persue his father in that way. I bet his form is a phoenix. huh huh? am I right? I hope so, I just cant seem to imagine his form to be some kind of normal animal. I wish you very much luck in persuing and finishing this story and know that you have gained a loyal follower. ( A Dutch one btw, didnt know whether you 'had' one of us yet. that sounds kinda wrong Xd)
So without much further adou, greetings and a very fine day to you!
| winchesterxgirl chapter 8 . 3/3/2012
I don't know if you remember me. I think I might have sent you PMs a million years ago, but back in the day when quizzila was awesome, I used to read your story on there and I greatly enjoyed it. In fact you're the reason I moved from that site, to hpff and finally to this site because you kept moving around.
I was going through my favorite list and realized I needed a good harry potter fix and this one always made me smile. I had completely forgotten about kally calling snape a vampire. I was giggling so much I almost woke my boyfriend up.
I wrote I go on, I was wondering if you had finished the story or not. I would hate to get to the last chapter and be left hanging, but I also understand posting chapters when other things are going on in your life.
Goodness, I remember before you moved from quizzila that you were somewhere in he hundreds, chapter wise.
I'm uber excited to keep reading, i really missed this story.
| The 10th Wand chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
hi I haven't read this yet but when I saw that youve actually continued into 2011 I figured I got to give it a try since going that long is really respectable, so I look forward to reading your story(hopefully) and catching up to your current chapters. Take care.
| Furionknight chapter 39 . 11/13/2011
Excellent story, I look forward to more :)
| Kyle Dodge chapter 39 . 9/21/2011
Do we really need more drama? The end of this chapter is stupid. Just another miscommunication that causes angst and hurt feelings. You can write better than this. We don't need to read about jealousy and drama when everyone knows they have feelings for each other.
| II-Gen3sis-II chapter 39 . 7/17/2011
I must say, for you to have grabbed my attention so absolutely that I've read all 39 in less than 24 hours is quite the accomplishment. I adore the setting and plot you've created here and I really cannot wait for your next update.
| Mini Luna chapter 39 . 7/15/2011
I love this story!
I read it in a single day. I became so obsessed with it!
Your writing is truly beautiful and engaging.
I also like how Kally is such an original and realistic new character. Few writers can pull that of you know.
You're one of them. :D
I have to say, this probably is the best and my favourite Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read.
| Trogo chapter 39 . 7/13/2011
Oh my god, every chapter leaves me wanting for more!
My heart leaped when I saw the email notification that you have updated, and rushed to read it. I must say I am confused with Regulus' role, to antagonize or ruffle feathers? However, it is quite amusing to see one 'out-of-place' character spicing discussions up a bit.
In response to Ron being turned into a werewolf: Oof! Kinda shock at first, but this is a test for Harry, in particular, to accept Ron and Remus for who they are, and not what they are, if they are non-prejudiced against werewolves.
The second part of the chapter is so bittersweet, mostly reminiscence of the past and thinking of the future, however, I felt that the ending in particular is what makes me crave for more, even though it evoked a feeling of: heart-wrenching. I would like to strangle Harry, seriously, how hard is it to say the truth, rather than go around it? GAAAHH! Gives me a headache because I really want to read the next chapter.
And for Hermione's return, kudos to Krum for breaking her out! I really want to see Harry's reaction and what the next great plan is, because Hermione no longer needs 'saving'. I was thinking, perhaps the kidnapping of Kaylens, for her abilities and connection with Harry. Hmm...
And for extra teenage romance angst, perhaps Kaylens and Dean get together, for a while? Haha, can't wait for Harry to literally explode D
Keep up the fantastic work Firefawn, I really, really, can't wait for your next chapters, craving it like Bees crave Nectar (or mosquitoes crave blood, however you want to see it xD). Please don't stop, if you get a writers' block, let me break that wall for ya, because I just can't see this fanfic ending anytime soon!
(If you read this whole review, I'd be flying to the moon!)
| peculiarxemma chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
... oops, I clicked on submit before I even finished writing my review. Probably a sign that I was babbling too much.
I was saying; I hope you plan on completing the story, because it's just brilliant. The plot is really good and interesting, and Kally is such a loveable character, even when she's being rude to Harry, haha. I'm hoping to see some familiar scenes from the version you posted on Quizilla, but then again, no matter how you tell the story, I just already know it'll be amazing. You were a really good author back then, and from what I've read so far, you are an even better one now. :)
You paragraphed so carefully, setting the perfect atmosphere to what's happening and adding a touch of humour every now and then - I really liked that. Also, we can easily feel what the character is feeling just because of the way you'd phrase some sentences, or italicise (is that even a word?) certain words. Speaking of words, the ones you used to describe the surrounding, and everything, really, were very well chosen. The only fault I'd find in your writing is the occasional mistake of using "your" instead of "you're" but that's a tiny detail you don't have to worry about.
I'm looking forward to reading the next 37 chapters, and you can't even begin to imagine how glad I am to have found your story again. But please don't make Daniel Radcliffe and Harry kill each other in the end this time. :P