Reviews for Labyrinth |
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Hyperpegasi chapter 5 . 10/18/2009 Poor Shippo is gone! XD Miroku is such a perv. But he's not all bad . . . And Kagome is royally confuzzling him. ) |
Hyperpegasi chapter 4 . 10/18/2009 Oh Shizzle. That can't be good, |
Hyperpegasi chapter 3 . 10/18/2009 XD I saw that one coming. But it makes me sad the poor old bird got his head cut off . . . |
Hyperpegasi chapter 2 . 10/18/2009 Huh. That's a cute twist. And I don't suppose Inuyasha IS David Bowie, but I think I know which one I like better. ) Why is she going to regret it? Way to make me worry . . . XD |
Hyperpegasi chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 WOW . . . I've never watched the movie, but the basics behind it practically had me drooling over it. I can already tell this will most likely be one of my very favorite stories! |
DarcyLowther chapter 16 . 8/15/2009 i love this story i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it |
Scotch Megafleet chapter 16 . 2/10/2009 A wonderfully written story. Just enough details to keep you on track, but not too many details to get you confused or bored with petty side-stories. I really enjoyed how indepth you went into the conflicts of really all the characters - it worked out so nicely. Just because I don't like stories that end up tied up in neat little bows, I was slightly dissapointed - but then thought about it and really wouldn't have wanted much any other way. Maybe if Sesshomaru was truely 'evil' it might have been something I'm more used to reading, but at the same time - I think the fact that Sesshomaru was just some old grouch, jealous demon made it so much more interesting and enjoyable overall. I would love to read a sequel, but as you already stated; that won't be happening. I don't like writing sequels (assuming I'd ever finish a story to actually have the chance to write one!), nor often like reading them. Just like rarely movies have good sequels, most narritive sequels are just, bleh... Well! Wrote my own little mini-novel for a review, haha. I'm going to go snoop on your profile and see if theirs any other fics that you've wrote that catch my eye. ;) Keep writing! You're great at it! |
Laa Chase chapter 4 . 1/7/2009 I can't believe you only have a 150 reviews. That's hardly enough credit for the way you write this. |
Laa Chase chapter 3 . 1/7/2009 Oh wow I didn't get it. Lol. Okay I got it, but maybe I didn't want to. Ha, in any case, I love how you brought it all together. I about squealed. I'm still grinning, by the way. You're very clever, indeed. |
Laa Chase chapter 2 . 1/7/2009 Hahaha this is fantastic! I haven't read an InuYasha fanfic in over three years; basically I stopped liking it. But this story has me grinning from ear to ear. I'll admit, it's the Labyrinth hook that got me. (Gah! I love that movie!) But it's your writing that has me staying. I can't wait to finish. Ciao. -Laa |
pooguy chapter 16 . 11/27/2008 great story. ilove the labyrinth it is a great movie |
ArtemisMoon chapter 16 . 10/9/2008 Well, I got my happy ending so not ranting or threats! Not that I really expected an unhappy ending, but I have been wrong before...anyway, I think overall you did a really great job of taking the basic plot and recreating it to suit the different characters. It was very creative and well-done, and I enjoyed all the extra plot details you tossed in. Thanks for the entertainment, even if it is several years down the road from when you wrote it. I know you have lost interest in Inuyasha fanfiction since this was written, but if you ever decide to come back, I'll be interested in seeing what you write. Maybe corrupt another movie? LOL _~ |
ArtemisMoon chapter 15 . 10/9/2008 Okay, still confused over all the rules of the spell, but otherwise that chapter rounded everything off nicely. I think in order to understand all the rules I would probably need to take a class on it, and that isn't going to happen, lol...the four I am taking are ENOUGH! So I'll just be satisfied with this and move on to see if I get a good, happy ending! |
ArtemisMoon chapter 14 . 10/9/2008 You know, I think that is the first time that I have ever seen Sesshoumaru described as a brat of all things! The mental image is rather funny, imagining him as a little spoild brat. Maybe pitching a fit...my humor loving brain is really getting carried away with that one, so I'd better move on before I completely lose my train of thought where the storyline is concerned... |
ArtemisMoon chapter 13 . 10/9/2008 Flowed along a little bit too much like the movie for my taste there, but still interesting, especially since Inuyasha is finally getting some time in the story! I am still rather confused by the entire thing, though, so I suppose I'll just have to see if the last chapters explain everything. |