Reviews for Labyrinth |
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Chi Yagami chapter 9 . 5/6/2008 hot guy from the chapter with many Mirokus... you mean Kouga? err I assumed he was Kouga.. o0 And I'm not sure which part of the movie this is... |
Chi Yagami chapter 8 . 5/6/2008 eheheh... yes, the scene right after Hoggle finishes aswering nature's call... D |
Chi Yagami chapter 7 . 5/6/2008 Chilly Down, neh? :D I'm totally loving this... |
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 16 . 11/25/2007 Aw! Great ending. I hope Miroku and Sango and Shippo were happy . . . waitaminute of course they were! |
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 15 . 11/25/2007 Finally we understand this story! |
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 14 . 11/25/2007 oh, beautiful chapter! |
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 13 . 11/25/2007 Well, I confidently say this is the most confusing story I've ever read. |
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 9 . 11/25/2007 Miroku how could you? All I can say |
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 2 . 11/25/2007 Regret huh? Sweet. This is hilarious! When does the romance part come in? |
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 1 . 11/25/2007 Never saw Labyrinth or Howl's Moving Castle, though I'd love to see the latter. This is going . . . differently than I pictured. That's a good thing! :) |
Snap on Smile chapter 16 . 9/19/2007 that was so god. i wuld have liked her to have miko powers but hey its ur story. i love it so much i can hardly describe it! lol u rok |
Pebbles chapter 3 . 7/22/2007 Hello, I need to say that you're an excellent writer! Ive read some of your fanfiction, and I can say, Im eager to read more. Your story lines, and description within your stories are very well done. You incorporated humour, and in general, you've managed to keep the personalities of the characters true to the Inuyasha shows/movies. Keep up the good work! |
smile chapter 1 . 6/18/2007 no -sob- it's over! i loved it ... now i have nothing good left to read ... it was great. lots of cute fluff moments. lots of really good plot too. :) |
sarika chapter 16 . 6/18/2007 omig - i love this story so much. seriously. you are fabulous. firstly: the characters were PERFECT! they're not as in character as the manga, but hey, this is fanfictionland and they really fit and grew into their roles. sesshoumaru was amazing. this story portrays him better than any other i have read. ever. and i'm not exaggerating. kagome was fabulous too. exactly what you search for in a fanfic but never seem to find. inuyasha was a bit different, but he turned out really well in the end. the last chapter or so summed him all up really nice, and BAM! he fit perfectly and i wondered why i thought he hadn't. and miroku! more in-character than i can describe! and the scene with the thousand mirokus and the groping and oh, that was really good ... secondly: the plot. great. i don't know how much you took from the movie (never seen it) but i really can't care. it was great. it complimented the original universe well. nice, thick, mysterious, and altogether most amazingly captivating. the beginning was a bit shaky, but once kagome started talking to the gate it all fell into place. the end bit, where inuyasha ended up in her world by mistake could have been elaborated on a bit more. because - he couldn't hear her, or smell her from the crystal, right? so maybe, bits about her voice, her scent in the room, how it felt to be actually in her presence ... etc. (that is, if you come back for revision. entirely unnecessary, ofcourse). anyways, sorry for the length. i couldn't help myself :) it really is such a wonderful fanfic. you are such an amazing authress. i hope you never abaondon inuyasha. this story is going to be running through my head for the next two weeks or so. i won't be able to get it out, or concentrate on anything else. espectially in my final exam tmrw which ive neglected to study for because i was too busy reading this :) in conclusion - you rock, story rocks, and once i get around to making a fanfic account, you're on my favs list. ta ta and keep up the IY spirit ... |
InuxKaglove chapter 6 . 6/6/2007 My guesses are:Sango,Sango,and Sango |