|Reviews for The Horse and the Swan|
| Pen52 chapter 22 . 6/20/2006
Ok, now I'm confused...
Is it possible that Guthwyn is in love with Tun already and isn't even aware of it?
Sister and brother reunited! And without any proffesional help, no less. ;)
| Andi-Scribbles chapter 22 . 6/17/2006
She's come a long way- being able to cry in front of others. The development is wonderful.*Claps*
*Sigh* Tun's departure better not turn out to be an actual year! Things can happen; he could come back sooner, right? Please? I mean, Guthwyn needs SOMEONE to love! She DESERVES it!
And I don't care if she's forgiven Eomer. I haven't. *angry huff* Stupid, good for nothing... Ahem. Well I guess he just has her best interests at heart. Even if he IS a sodding idiot.
More soon, please, I'm anxious to hear more!
| Andi-Scribbles chapter 21 . 6/15/2006
Crash diet Uncontrollable fear :(
I hope Tun comes back. Seriously, she needs someone to love. Make it better. The poor girl's seen nothing but misery since she was like 12. And she vomits like the 3 year old girl I babysit. Something tells me she won't live another couple of years unless she starts eating like a normal person. Another wonderful chapter- write more very soon!
| Pen52 chapter 20 . 6/14/2006
First of all, the nightmare was just... terrifying. The wiggling maggots and the appearance of a suddenly decomposing Haldor would be enough to drive anyone insane.
The conversation with Legolas was nicely paced. The atmosphere was awkward, even tense at times, but there was an underlining feeling of growing trust and friendship in the exchange that did not go unnoticed. And the air between them was somewhat cleared. Always a good thing.
Brother-sister communication not going well, I see. ;)
Eomer should summon the royal psychologist and schedule a family session. :) Or start groveling real fast...
| Andi-Scribbles chapter 20 . 6/12/2006
Oh, that can't be good. She overstepped her bounds a little bit, but Eomer was being a jerk. So what if Tun loves her! Oi... men! Anyway, loved the Legolas/Guthwyn interaction in this chapter. It makes a lot of sense for her to be comforted by him. Maybe this is the beginning of her road to genuine recovery (and not physical recovery either). Oh, and you'd better not kill off Tun before she figures out he loves her! If that happens again I'LL have to help poor Guthwyn put herself out of her misery. She's supposed to learn from her mistakes, lol! Okay, it's a good sign for you when I rant like this. It means in a twisted sort of way this story has become real for me. Great one. More very soon!
| neFaerieous chapter 18 . 6/8/2006
Ah! Ah! Cliffhanger! Action! Happy reader. Well, we won't have to wait long for the next delicious chapter.
Way to tell him Gúthwyn! Éomer is still being quite the, um, dork. Both for sending Tun away, and not having an ounce of the common sense needed to understand why she wouldn't even think of someone liking her (which I guess he wouldn't seeing as he had a decent life).
As always, an excellent and smooth read. Definitely the best story I've read on this site. Thank you!
| Andi-Scribbles chapter 18 . 6/6/2006
Oh, FINALLY! I would've blown up at him long ago... poor Tun! And I'd like to hear Legolas' thoughts right about now. Hopefully Guthwyn will realize that Tun loves her before he croaks too! (Just kidding...) but honestly, wonderful chapter! I loved the emotion conveyed in this one... keep the updates regular!
| Pen52 chapter 17 . 6/6/2006
This is so not looking good for Tun. Aw... poor guy just can't get a break.
And by saying that, I mean, give him a break, now. Come on, you know you want to...
| neFaerieous chapter 17 . 6/4/2006
Yeah, Éomer needs a swift kick right now. What, he thinks Gúthwyn is just totally fine now that she's home? I mean, totaly realistic that he would, especially being utterly consumed with ruling a kingdom in the aftermath of a war, and he probably doesn't really understand, but still, picking on Tun's not gonna fix his damage. Gr.
Rather wondering when Hammel will really understand what Haldor was doing to her...if he doesn't already. Kid's adjustment issues are pretty on, like others have said. Sucks to be him. (Testament to your fabulous authorship that his character is so real.)
I hope no one's expecting Gúthwyn to be cool in any way, shape, or form, with marriage. The girl can't even wear white or tell when someone's got a scandalous crush on her...she needs a best friend! Like Cobryn. I keep hoping he somehow figures her out and is able to help her, since her family's not doing a good job anymore. Plus, he went through hell, too. (These are just such awesome characters!)
Well, we'll just have to wait and see what the keyboard of fate has in store for everyone, eh?
| Andi-Scribbles chapter 17 . 6/3/2006
Wow. Right now I really hate Eomer and Gamling. Which is totally unreasonable, I know, since they're only protecting her. But do they have to be such idiots about it? God, if I had been Guthwyn then I would've put up a better fight with Eomer than that. She's seen and been through much worse than tripping and falling onto a sparring partner, I'd say. And love doesn't exactly listen to reason. *Le sigh* Oh well, Tun will bounce back somehow. If anyone is to marry Guthwyn in this fic I'd say Tun has a pretty good chance, even with the King of Rohan on his ass. Love (most of the time) conquers all...
| Pen52 chapter 16 . 6/1/2006
I’m happy to see Guthwyn recuperating from her traumatic past somewhat. The interaction between her and Legolas was very well done and the twist in the end was remarkably satisfying. She is finally starting to respond to Legolas as a person in his own right and not simply an echo of Haldor. That was gratifying to see.
While I was reading, I thought about why it was so hard for Guthwyn to deal with Legolas in any shape or form. At first, it irked me. After all, she has known him for more then 18 months now (correct me if I’m wrong) and in all that time he has never been anything but kind towards her, even when she was less then deserving of such treatment (spy of the Enemy, extremely rude and hostile towards him for no apparent reason…), so why would she still cringe when ever he approached her?
The sad truth is, however unfair to him this seems, that’s the way it’s got to be. Anything else would be a cop out and would hurt the integrity of the story in the long run. If anyone went trough what she did and happened to meet the exact look a like of their tormentor later, aside form the complete and utter mental breakdown that would follow, it wouldn’t make a bit of difference to them if, spiritually, this person was Gandhi himself reincarnated. How ever kind and supportive the look a like would be, or what ever he did, would pale to insignificance in comparison to the horrible memories.
So, what I’m saying in a rather roundabout way, is that I like how you deal with the tension between the two and the gradual evolution of their tentative relationship. Hammel and Haiweth’s reactions to Legolas were also dead on in my opinion. I’ve got to say, Hammel can be scarily adult at times for his age, but a childhood spent in Mordor would do that to anyone. Or practically anyone, since Haiweth seems to be virtually unaffected; except the nightmares and her understandable fear of Legolas, she seems to be a normal, well adjusted child. That’s no doubt the direct result of Guthwyn and Borogor’s care and protection.
On a side note, Eomer seems to be getting more and more reasons to introduce poor Tun’s face to his fist lately. All that jaw clenching and teeth gnashing must be mightily tiring. And Guthwyn still doesn’t have a clue… Wake up woman!
Phew! That was long. Anyway, I loved the last few chapters to bits, if that wasn’t clear enough.
PS: Who are you pairing Guthwyn up with? I’m dying of curiosity.
| Andi-Scribbles chapter 16 . 6/1/2006
Good for her! Keep it going, please! I want some Eomer-kicking-Tun action. I can sense it coming up...
| Eriala chapter 15 . 5/30/2006
and next chapter, i hope, is when a fluffy bunny comes and distributes hugs to all you poor characters?
but your writing was wonderful, as always. and thank you so much for updating now - if you hadn't, i would have had to spend this time one my history essay. *shudder*
| Andi-Scribbles chapter 15 . 5/29/2006
I KNEW Hammel was going to do something. He was too quiet. And now we know how he was affected more than he showed. Hopefully, the three will learn to realize Legolas and Haldor are opposites. Another good one! Write some more soon!
| Ex Igne chapter 14 . 5/29/2006
I stumbled across your trilogy a while back and would like to say that these are some of the best fanfics I have read on this website. I want to commend you for all your efforts into bringing this trilogy alive, though I am surprised by how many reviewers actually post. This is what a true fanfiction is, and well crafted in terms of plot, character development, and for the most part faithful to the movie (and, to my likings) the book. Most people wil just write something about the movies, as the frenze had been rather recent, but it fills me with joy in knowing that there are people out there who actually enjoy the books. Not that I'm saying that I hate the movies, as they are some of the best adaptions, if you overlook the many deviations. I hope you continue writing, and I expect to see more stories as well as this trilogy.