Reviews for The World Came Crashing Down
Rebekah chapter 1 . 12/2/2001
I think that you should have Danny survive from his injuries from the car bomb. Then later have Danny propose to Nancy and she accept. Jack and Sherri should also get remarried to each other.
indirokk chapter 1 . 7/23/2001
Aww, how sad :( Well written.
Elena George chapter 1 . 6/14/2001
You built the tension well. I could see Danny surviving the explosion, but likely he's going to be pretty messed up in any event. He could have been caught in the chest by the door flying off (might have protected him fm the flames). What surprised me was that the glass doors of the bldg remained! An explosion of that magnitude should have blown them and any other glass w/in several hundred yards out of the frames.
shannie514 chapter 1 . 5/29/2001
Great scene! I hope that Danny survived the explosion...Keep us updated!
Trekkieb chapter 1 . 5/24/2001
I liked it!
Kathy chapter 1 . 5/23/2001
Okay, so how do you think they can keep him alive. It's driving me crazy. But I like the writing and seeing things from a different point of view.
Vicki chapter 1 . 5/23/2001
I'm a die-hard Danny fan, and your story made me cry. Its very good, but could oyu please write some other ones with happier endings?