Reviews for If Given a Chance
sp chapter 17 . 7/9/2010
thank you for a wonderful story, update soon, please
nurr chapter 18 . 6/30/2010
I really like this. I think it's one of the most unique AU's I've ever read, and an enjoyable surprise (because the summary was quite a bit misleading, since often it meant that such story would focus on how this and that raised Harry).
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Excellent start!
ILikeComps chapter 18 . 9/19/2009
This is a good story but I just can't figure out how demoralized Hermione is and the fact that Ron and her hate each other. Thanks for sharing!
Merrymow chapter 18 . 11/6/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
bloomingrose89 chapter 18 . 8/22/2007
great and interesting story
Shinigami chapter 18 . 8/11/2007
WTF? WHY is Harry friends with Ron? He isn't EVEN acting like a real friend. If he was a real friend to Harry, he would believe Harry when he said he NEVER put his name in the goblet! And Harry's made it clear that he hates his fame and the spotlight! Plus he's being a MAJOR jackass! Toying with a female's feelings isn't EVEN funny in the leastest. It royally pisses me off! SO I'm waiting for Harry to dump Ron's aSS!
Beth5572 chapter 18 . 8/10/2007
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri
Beth5572 chapter 17 . 3/28/2007
I would love to see what you write next.

Thank you,

Terri
Alex chapter 12 . 8/12/2006
I really liked this story up to this point. Dumbledore is an authority figure forcing two minor children to lay in a bed together nearly naked while one is unconscious so that he can make a pornographic video. This would be okay if you were playing it as a sexual abuse scenario, but the way you have written it, it is okay for Dumbledore to do this as a joke.

If Remus, Siruis and Severus are decent guardians at all they would press charges against Dumbledore for abuse. I shudde at your lack of morals that you would find this situation funny. If anyone ever dared to do this to my children, they would be lucky to escape with their balls intact.
ri-chan05 chapter 17 . 8/11/2006
this wasn't the last chapter was it? (I hope not...it leaves so many questions...) -
ri-chan05 chapter 6 . 8/10/2006
oh. my. god...was that boggart based off of Hard Gay? (if it was then that was halarious...if not...well it still seemed funny to me...XD)
phoenixfighter chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
i have to say the beggining of the story was good but towards the last chapters of yours really SUCK. I don'y like all the confusion you have with the military man, the mark on hermione, if hermione is a death eater, what is up with her parents, and why was she trying to killing him when he woke up if she saved his life. YOU BETTER MAKE HER TURN TO THE LIGHT SIDE! Well...that is if she is already on the light side then good but the direction of the story is horrible. cya.
harrymione4ever7 chapter 16 . 6/18/2006
i loved it update soon plz!11
Dave chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Your story had me hooked on the wed for most of the night

keep up the good writing
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