|Reviews for Desert Rose|
| fruitsmoothy chapter 12 . 3/7
:D great story, loved the adventure. Perfect amount of flirty, dangerous, and Doctor Who-iness.
| QuicksilverWitch chapter 12 . 10/17/2011
BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN! :D BRAVO!
| Moonprincess92 chapter 12 . 9/12/2011
I can't tell you how much i love this story! It's got everything in it, adventure and romance and i really ended up caring about your OCs. I actually felt sad when Jaren died (and secretly hoped the Doctor would find a way to save him, but no such luck). I think that's the mark of a good author, to make the readers care and there's a lot of room for other stories (finding out about the Time Agency, Jack, etc) so i reckon you could have real fun with this. I certainly enjoyed reading every second of it. : D
| seekerchasing chapter 12 . 8/25/2011
Brilliant story. i absolutely loved it even though you made me feel so sad for poor Neera
| MoonyandPadfoot12 chapter 5 . 2/11/2011
"If you can't kill it, shag it"
I can totally see Jack's philosophy being that LOL! this story is fantastic :D
| MoonyandPadfoot12 chapter 4 . 2/11/2011
When he'd stumbled out of the bathroom, dripping wet and naked as the day he was born, she'd just walked by him, whistling and twirling the TARDIS key on her finger. As he'd cleared the water from his eyes, she'd glanced over her shoulder and chirped "Bit cold in here, is it?" and continued walking.
| MoonyandPadfoot12 chapter 3 . 2/11/2011
I love it when things are detailed! Your characterization is good as well. I can just imagine The Doctor speaking when I read this :D
| MoonyandPadfoot12 chapter 2 . 2/11/2011
Woop go Rose :D I like where this is going! A lot of twists and turns :D
| MoonyandPadfoot12 chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
This story looks great :D
| Black Alya Wolf chapter 12 . 8/19/2008
Brilliant ending! It's one in the morning, though, so I'm not up for saying much more 'n this:
Okay, I have to say a little more than that. Seriously, this is great. I love how you have the Doctor and Rose's relationship basically staying the same...just acknowledged rather than avoided, and you had a crisis going on around them at the same time, with action and conspiracies and twists that just made it perfect.
Like I said. Fan-bloody-tastic.
| Clockwork Mockingbird chapter 12 . 6/7/2008
Good name, but a GREAT story! I oughta throttle people for not reviewing it more, but I hear violence is frowned upon. Oh well. One more review for you! Meep!
| Rachel chapter 12 . 11/10/2007
Holy Moley! That was incredible!
I really have no criticism or anything to make. Because it was so great!
| mebee chapter 12 . 9/16/2007
Simply sublime! This story gripped me right from the beginning - and the ending didn't fail to impress - you've done a fantastic job! I really enjoyed reading that )
| Kasara chapter 12 . 7/24/2007
I LOVED THIS STORY!
It was fantastic!
| syrraki chapter 12 . 7/19/2007
Ooh what a good story, you mixed romance and action very well, and your original characters were super. Bravo.