|Reviews for Slipups Of The Ghostly Kind|
| DannyPhantomPhandom chapter 6 . 5/29
How is it that only I reread this after nearly a year that I notice Eclipse is an OC? Darn, really don't like OCs that play major part. OCs that are background characters, for say, an English class are fine. They're minor characters. But VILLAINS?!
| LK chapter 11 . 3/30
Sweat band, cloaks have hoods and are a thicker material and you should call it G.H.D.S. it's a acronym for ghost Hunter destroyer squad or if you wanted you could replace squad with legion and a L
| DannyPhantomPhandom chapter 3 . 6/28/2016
Danny! You did something stupid again! It's scaring me how many stupid things you have done! And you Dash! You're even worse! GIRLS! GET HIM!
| Specter14 chapter 17 . 10/30/2015
Woooooooooo that was an awesome story! :D
| Great chapter 17 . 8/23/2015
A good story, I hope you update the sequel soon. Looking forward to more!
| lumutness chapter 5 . 1/19/2015
Well, the story development is unique and interesting. Especially in DP fandom, since Mr. Lancer suspicions wasn't about Danny being half ghost (jeez, common sense demands that no normal people would even think of it. That boy was so paranoid sometimes), but a victim of (I'm almost certain of this) abuse and/or serious bullying. He was on the wrong track, of course. XD
For characterization, you keep it IC enough. I think. I like your Lancer. But, I haven't see Dash (except in a mentioning) since the first two chapter. Which is kinda off, since he was listed as one of the main character. I think, it would be better if every main character gets an appearance in every chapter, even if only cameo. Just saying.
Okay, let me read the next chapter. ;)
| Kattyllin chapter 15 . 12/9/2014
" It just seemed too much like something out of a cartoon." Lol, i see what you did there... :}
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/11/2014
"When life gives you lemons, throw the lemons back at life and tell it to make its own dang lemonade!"
I love that quote! It's so drawling hilarious!
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/11/2014
No songs have ever made me cry...ever. But here are some sad songs I definitely recommend:
You Don't Know Her Like I Do
I Drive Your Truck
Hope on the Rocks
Drink a Beer
All of these songs are pure awesomeness. Ill go ahead and tell ya in case you don't like this genre, they're all country. I love country music!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/11/2014
I love this story and am so glad I read this AFTER it was completed so I didn't have to wait! My superpower: I would be able to make any wish come true, including my own, and be able to take back the wishes. When I take back wishes, the widget would have the choice to whether or not time was reversed but I would still remember the events. I would want that because then I could wish for any superpower I wanted and take it back I'd I don't like it or grow tired of it (though I doubt that would happen)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Some say the world will end in fire
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire
And if it had to perish twice
I think I know enough hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice
I love this poem as much as I love your stories! Sorry, I just had to see if I could cite it cause I only spent like three minutes top memorizing it word for word. There might be a mistake, but I don't think so. Anyway, sounds awesome so far!
| Invisiblegirl16 chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
I like the stories where Lancer finds out strange habits too! I mean, Danny *does* cut class and go to the bathroom a lot. How could he *not* notice something's up?
| Dusk chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
This. Is. AWESOME!
| DPfruitloop chapter 17 . 1/25/2012
HOLY MOTHER OF FRUITLOOPS THIS ROCKED!
| Danny1FANtom chapter 17 . 1/10/2012