|Reviews for Sky|
| Anthony1l chapter 5 . 5/5/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 5 . 3/10/2010
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| Mr. Wizard chapter 5 . 3/28/2008
You cover so much ground in this. Really liked the wackiness of Drakken's scheme. I bet getting knocked out was a relief of sorts for Shego. Good to see Bonnie pulling her life together. Now that I know this was your first story, I'm more impressed.
| Mr. Wizard chapter 4 . 3/28/2008
The sisters were just unbelieveable. No wonder Ron went beserk there. I was a little more shocked at Kim's behavior, but it was something you could understand. Bonnie had been her unrelentling enemy for how many years? Good for her to at least try.
| Mr. Wizard chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
So she kind of has a thing for him? Didn't see that, and I wonder how Kimmie will feel there. Good job, Ron,glad to see that the Ron shine works for so many.
| Mr. Wizard chapter 2 . 3/25/2008
Good range of emotions for Ron. Where's Kim or her family? Really digging your use of the sky, a standard, but it is for a reason.
| Mr. Wizard chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Now, I read this once, why didn't I review it?
Good opening. Like the background to Bonnie's family, and her depression is real enough. Good dialog as well.
| Anime-Apothecary chapter 5 . 2/17/2007
All in all, it was a good story. It had plot, got to the point, and had meaning. Plus, It's always nice to read a happy ending. Nice work, I will definately read your other stories.
| Anime-Apothecary chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
That was awesome when Ron yelled at Bonnie's sisters. I can't wait o see how this ends.
| Anime-Apothecary chapter 3 . 2/17/2007
oh yeah, Ron's the man...
Sorry, got nothing else to say except I'm going to keep reading, but I will take this chance to thank you for reading and reviewing my story, "I'm Coming to you" I appreciate it.
| Anime-Apothecary chapter 2 . 2/17/2007
This was definatley a great chapter! There was so much emotion oing on. If it was me though, I probably wouldn't have yelled, but that's what makes Ron, Ron. Also, I don't think it was necassary to type out Bonnies wail like that. The adjective "Wailed" would have been enough to give the impression you were looking for.
| Anime-Apothecary chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
This was a well written chapter. It was a little short, but it doesn't matter what the length of a chapter is if the story is well written.
It did make me think though. With all the suicides from kitchen knifes, you would think they would do something about it.
| Uru Baen chapter 5 . 2/14/2007
I see now. You lost someone, or know someone who did. My condolances.
You honored them with a great ending to a nice short story.
| Uru Baen chapter 2 . 2/14/2007
Nice drama, but a little more character development would be nice- it would make me honestly care about the characters. It's something that I have trouble with too. You have a unique style, you write well, you just have some fine tuning to do.
| Uru Baen chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
I realize this is your first chapter of your first story, but it needs a little bit of editing. Good premise, but you could pace it a little more slowly, or make it more suspenseful.
Other than the pace, great chapter.