This was cute as hecc, I read it all in one night. Some real cute ranryo and the character development near the end was nice! I doooo like more fluff n cozier endings but thats personal taste

This is a good story. Its just the format, I was able to ignore it though. If you ever come back to rewrite this i look forward to it Good job.

Everyone has said this is a good story so I’m trying to hold out and finish it. But the way you have written the layout is not easy to read so I am disappointed, but I’m trying to stick through. If you ever come back to rewrite this please put it in paragraph format.

This was an amazing story hidden deep in the archive. I loved every moment, each twist, each uncovered memory, and it had me hooked from start to finish. It was really cute. - Xadlly the imp girl

While I’ve always really liked this story I felt like everything after the training trip was really rushed. And the end didn’t really make sense considering Ranma has accepted her gender for months at this point in the context of the story. Like I don’t even really understand how Soun had a real background in magic outside of the deal either.

The whole magic bit at the end made the ending felt cheap.

aaaahhhhh!

loved it so much
great story

Wow, awesome story! You had a great plot and you executed it very well. It was fun to have the girls fight over Ryoga, for once. And it was a really good idea to show how a relationship between Akane and Ryoga would not work out once he switched from idolization to reality. I liked how all relationships developed until the end, but I think what I liked most was at the beginning, when Ryoga has to give his blood for Ranma, and the realizations that ensue. It was all very convincing.
Oh and I should not forget to mention your flawless writing. I think I spotted about 2 or 3 typos in the whole story, which amounts to nothing. This is not the main reason for liking a story, but it makes the reading really enjoyable.
I'll tell you the one little thing that annoyed me (but it was not too important): after it was a given that Ryoga was cured of both his curses, where did he stay? His parents' home? Camping? What bugged me is: why was he still carrying his pack (if not lost) and his umbrella (if not Jusenkyo cursed)? As strong as he is, you'd think he would not bother with such heavy luggage once he didn't have to anymore.
So all in all, many thanks for writing and sharing this. I wish you had written more, as announced in your last AN. Especially more RR, but even if I'm not really interrested in Nabiki and Kuno, the summary for Smart Business sounded fun.

CreamSoda1382 Please make some sequel to this Ranma 1/2 story Worlds Fall Apart please!

You really need to work on your spelling more often CreamSoda1382 seriously please!

Yeah no... The story seemed promising and actually reminded me a lot about a story idea I myself considered writing some 15 years ago... But then I noted that part with Ryoga at the end of chapter 3 and became disgusted. I know this is an older story... But still, Ryoga being paired with Ranma is even worse than the Ranma being paired with Akane. Ryoga and Ranma as a couple makes absolutely no sense as the Hibiki boy has always hated Ranma and Ranma have always found him to be a pathetic entitled whining loser deserving of being made fun of.

The final two chapters right after Ryoga left when he found out about the competition has left much to be desired. It should be happy, but all that I feel is depressed, it doesn't evoke a wish for happy endings but rather a vengeful feeling that it should end with tragedy. Everyone got off too easy. If you had just had Ryoga soften up and except Ranma after she confessed her love it would have been the perfect happy ending, but as it stands it just makes Akane, Nabiki, Ryoga seem like assholes that should suffer in the deepest and darkest reaches of hell, that they don't deserve happy endings, don't deserve a chance at redemption. Their actions deserve consequence, not just a light tap on their shoulders.

This was an awesome story. Thank you for writing it. :'3

B .EVER

When you said something was going on in the background, I thought you were talking about Ranma's mom, not Akane's dad. I was blindsided by him showing up again.
I adore this story!

I think the story peaked at the training trip, honestly. Once Akane and Ranma started their war everything started to go fast-forward. The ending in particular felt rushed.

I liked it, but the second half definitely weighed down the story as a whole in my opinion.