Reviews for The Mark in the Lace
jnautking chapter 9 . 4/26/2020
Powerful man
Nightgazer333 chapter 5 . 9/24/2014
"Keeper of the nine who guide the powers of Celestia."



What does the Princess of Equestria have to do with this, that's not her world?
SuperiorShortness chapter 9 . 2/21/2011
Hope your trilogy isn't dead!

A Fan,

Trugeta chapter 9 . 2/20/2011
Finally caught up. Suffice to say and to be honest, never saw that happy end coming. Not to say that it's a bad thing, but unexpected. I like it.

That said, great story, you betcha you'll see me in your future endeavors!
Sammy Holzbein chapter 7 . 1/26/2011
Hi Materia Blade. As you recommended, I started reading this sequel. All in all it's a very enjoyable read. Intricate plot, well-written, good characterisation, the whole works. Sadly I'm not able to read on, however. It's got nothing to do with you. I find myself so much disliking what is happening that I can't go on. Maybe I've got a problem there myself, maybe it's just so much out of my world, but the whole theme of Ranma's gender identity and the crisis that follows is not something I can or want to deal with. I also have a problem with the development between Keika and Irathul. This kind of manipulation and exploitation of Keika's naivety and helplessness, as well as the motives behind it are so diametrically aposed to my character and world views that I almost feel sick. Finally, I've noticed that WoT, at least in this stretch of it's history, is not my cup of tea at all.

So, in conclusion, I stopped reading because of these issues, but I also give you my thanks for the good literary experience. It's the aim of literature to evoque emotions and to make us think, after all, and on that you succeeded.
lemartes chapter 9 . 9/3/2010
awesome story, thanks for sharing it.
enderverse chapter 9 . 11/12/2009
This is an incredibly difficult story to read. Mostly because I know absolutely nothing about wheel of time. Haven't even gotten around to reading the Wikipedia article yet. And yet its still an awesome story.
Bobboky chapter 9 . 8/29/2009
Spacefly chapter 9 . 8/16/2009
I just love your story. It is enthralling, moving and all around well-written.

I didn't know anything about Wheel of Time before, but it sure awakened my interest.
TegwenielWestwind chapter 9 . 5/15/2009
Good conclusion to a confusing story. You managed to keep things sane, despite the inherent insanity.
muishiki chapter 9 . 4/29/2009
Fun chapter. Good to see that you're making progress on this!
anonymous chapter 9 . 4/20/2009
I've been waiting for you to update for a long time! I'm glad you did. This is a very good story. Well thought out and written. I hope you'll start on the next one soon.
James Axelrad chapter 9 . 4/14/2009
a very dramatic ending to this arc.
Moriko Nightdream chapter 9 . 4/14/2009
You're right, that was really short but you said you're writting more so I can live with that - I'm just glad there's an author who still updates that's worth reading -
deathtraps chapter 9 . 4/14/2009
A very compelling story that had me on my toes for every word. I'm really looking forward to the final sequel. GL and hopefully be seeing it soon :P
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