Reviews for The Mark in the Lace
Krimzonrayne chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
Hey, ya Dustin, to be how's it going?

Wow, nice man great prologue, a lil strong but i guess that your style,

I've read So be it and i honestly says it very good. Mm.. what to say... oh yeah WRITE MORE! and... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

P.S. a little point to watch out for, Keika is a little too normal all thing considered, i.e. isolation, immortality, deprived childhood (toys? lollies? crush?)

I don't wanna point it out but, maybe make her a little wierder, ne?
Preventer Squall chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
It's great to see another of your fanfictions up!

Something I'm curious about is why you posted the Sailor Moon portion up last, when it was the part that came right after the battle while the Ranma/Keika part happened 16 years later? It's just something that struck me as strange, though I still can't wait for another chapter.

With the book, an item of the former Pluto Senshi, will Keika will be able to get them back to Japan? Or does this mean another trip through the WOT world before they can go home? And what plans do you have for the NWC? A relationship between Rei and Ryoga will certainly be interesting. Maybe he'll teach the Senshi some martial arts, since the rest of the group has scattered to the winds. Do you have any pairing plans for Ramna, or will he just focus on taking care of his daughter?

No matter the outcome, I eagerly await the next installment of your fic! Don't stop anytime soon!
Irony chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
No review for you!
Ozzallos chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Ah, goodies. Of course, I need not tell you that this chapter was much too short, right? Be that as it may, I'm salivating for more of this story.

You're already on my fav author list, so I'm all out of checkboxes to mark here :P
ranma hibiki chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
YAY! finnaly a follow up.

one thing ive been wondering though, if time passes in the world where ranma and keika are, and keika grew up to a teenager after who knows (cept keika and ranma) how long. then why doesnt ranma age?
Howard Russell chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Thank you for continuing.

I'm a little surprised that, after accidentally killing an arms-master, Ranma even dared to train her daughter.

I'd be surprised if Ranma and Keika were speaking Japanese. Given how little of her life Ranma was exposed to spoken Japanese-as opposed to written, which I'm sure she saw a lot of in the book-and how much time she spent on the WoT world, I'd expect them to use that language. Heck, Keika might not know any Japanese at all. Perhaps not even written Japanese. It's not like Ranma has any books on the subject or even paper to write on. The only written form of Japanese that Keika has ever been exposed to would be what the person in the book had seen. And, since the book person is always an adult, there's little chance for them to see a children's schoolbook.

How did Keika become immortal? She has to be, since there's no food or water in the pocket dimension. And, given that she's immortal, how did she grow up and age?

Creepy evil thought: Keika, exploring her new Pluto powers, could accidentally teleport herself out of the pocket dimension. Alone. Ranma would end up trapped for many, many more millenia.
Ghent Johanson chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
I loved So be it, and have been looking forward to this sequel. It defiantly lives up to expectations. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more of it.
Shakeval chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
OH BABY YES! your back, your back, woohoo.

well what a way to kick off the next installment in the story.

wonder what ranma was going to teach his daughter?

will they be able to escape now?

what does this mean now that pluto's new senshi has become active?

how is the WOT world going, seeing as there are senshi there?

how are the asedi reacting to these senshi?

and finally will keiko be able to use the one power?

great chappy and thankyou for coming back and bringing this great story to a poor readers heart.
aqualens chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
I was wondering if you were going to be able to do a sequel to your fic, I'm glad to see this chapter. And I was not disappointed, it tied up a fair few of the loose ends that was left in So Be It. Keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to the next one.
Wonderbee31 chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Okay, write faster.

Soeey 'bout that, just had to be a little moron, but here and now, this is a great strsat to the followup, you captured a lot of the Senshi's own doubts, as well as the anguish of losing a loved one with Usagi and the others and Ms. Aino, and can just imagine what'll happen when they get to the Tendo home, oh boy. Now with the new Pluto there with Ranma, should be interesting to see what changes'll be made maybe to the timeline, as wella s when Evil Pluto might show up, and whether or not she can be redeemed, or is she completely gone for good.
Lord Oberon chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Excellent start! Will Keika master Plutos powers soon and get them out of the hellhole? Well done, keep it up.
Dumbledork chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Excellent. Can't wait to read more. Will this sequel focus on Keika or will Ranma still play a big role?
TerraBull chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Good work, Questions?

*Laugh* Has Ranma become like his Father in a way? Raising her only child in the Art, and now being the center of her child's world? I was wondering if the kid is now as strong normally as the rest of the Senshi in battle mode.

If she met other folks, would she fixate on them? or cling more tightly to her parent?

What is the word I am looking for, will she be affraid of open spaces if she leaves with Ranma?

The kid has heard the stories all her life, does she know about her parent's other form? or will she become like a few others, seeing her parent as 'perfect', and chase after in either form, perhaps changing the rating of this fic?

Will she be a nudist? *laugh* except for the Fuku?

A lot more questions, but for now, Good work again.

To recap, where are the others now? wondering if they would be reincarnated or someone else got their powers, if Ranma might draw one of them perhaps? And Akane! *laugh* will she return as a Senshi merger?

Cont when the urge strikes! Hopefully soon!
FairyQilan chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Continue. i want to know more of Pluto's death.
ranger5 chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Very nice. Good character interaction. Now update soon (g)
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