Reviews for The Mark in the Lace |
---|
Innortal chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Damn good work, and looking forward to more. |
brindani chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Very nice addition to the 'So Be It' title. I've engoied reading this story since I found it by acedent while browsing through the site. You have a very good way of telling the story with just the right amount of show without leading into the problem overt description. I greatly look forward to seeing how this new story will progress. brindani |
chaosthief1 chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 I look forward to the continued adventures in this series. Personally i'd like to see more WoT, but the Senshi are alright. Thanks for your great work. Chaos |
Dragon Man 180 chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Interesting prologue. I hope that Keika will now have the ability to get herself and Ranma out of their prison so they can return to Earth. Will Akane's soul be reborn? I'm glad the Senshi will be fighting for Love, Justice, and Peace. And if Setsuna does show up, I hope Keika and Ranma kick her evil ass for taking Akane from them! |
Sopchoppy chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 I have been looking forward to this, can't wait till the next installment. |
Bobboky chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 harsh that usagi cannot resurrect them this time, awesome start though and i look forward to Ranma's reaction to seeing his daughter with the power of pluto his most hated enemy |
AscendedWarrior chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Very interesting, I wonder where you plan on going with this one... Can't wait for the next chapter, be back then! |
sandcrawlr chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Nice man, very nice. I was wondering when you would get around to the sequel, but it was worth the wait. And yes, it was a fitting continuation. :) |
James Axelrad chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 AWSOME! a great fic continues! |
Anon chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Oh goodie...more crap. If your going to do a crossover...atleast do soemthing that fits. This just made my head hurt. |
Silence-Darkness chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Hrn? The review box now comes with a spellchecker? How insulting. Don't they believe we can leave quality reviews? Anyway, a fine adaptation of my points. Better than the things I thought of, myself. I liked your ending sentence: this time, it packed infinitely more oomph than the previous one did. It's a shame that you couldn't use some of the phrases I did - that'd be downright cheating, as I'd be pretty much writing half your story - because I thought some of them were pretty neat as well. Perhaps I should reduce the amount of examples I dish out - leave you to pick and take the best without my limitations. Glad that you clarified the pain bit first, as well as the descriptors of their states. I wonder if the Mercury Computer was something you tacked in after the second round of editing, or something you planned on revealing later on. Either way, the future impact cannot be ignored - haven't watched BSSM, but from whatever crossover fics there are out there, I've figured enough on how reliant the team is on it. Still, it appears that you couldn't edit what I called the "cheerleading" section. Ah well, perhaps there was no other way around it - you needed them to deliver the moral boost and transit into the ending. Either way, you've applied a fine level of polish to this chapter. I can see one or two spots where further improvements can be made (should you, after finish Epic number 2) in a later revision. Anyway, it's nice to see that you applied a majority of my comments. A warming feeling, knowing that your opinion is valued. Call me for the next chapter! Silence-Darkness. |
Awey chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Huzzah! You would be right, for I certainly do want more! |
John Tannius chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Nice start on the new sequel. I'm assuming that with the emergence of the power of Pluto, Keika will be able to escape with her 'mom' back home. Loved the first story, looking forward to this. |
borg rabbit chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 I became sad and depressed when I realized that you had no intention of resurrecting Akane or the others with the Ginzuisho. Still, the growing up that is being evidenced by the senshi leads me to think that 'something' good will happen in the end. Lord knows, your Ranma has suffered a lot for the world. Ciao, Wes |
hmr chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 WAHH!ITS GOOD TO KNOW THAT THERE'S A SEQUAL! AAWESOME CHAPTER! MORE!KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON! |