Reviews for The Mark in the Lace |
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Xeronoia chapter 6 . 7/5/2007 Awesome job. Thats was a pretty neat twist with Herb and Rand. Look forward to more. |
Selmephren chapter 6 . 7/5/2007 Wow! This is going great! |
borg rabbit chapter 6 . 7/5/2007 Looks like Ranma needs to learn control, as was seen in earlier chapters. Really a shame so many innocents had to die. It'll be something to see Rand return, fully dragon. Nice chapter length, thanks. Wes |
Sopchoppy chapter 6 . 7/5/2007 Great Chapter, thanks for updating |
DeafKnight chapter 6 . 7/5/2007 I remember you saying that you write faster when so,I wish you everlasting job. |
James Axelrad chapter 6 . 7/5/2007 an odd chapter. the stuff happening in the 'real' world is tough to keep track of now, but hopefully that will change as the fic progresses. |
Ph34r Productions chapter 6 . 7/5/2007 Awsome chapter again, I liked the part with Keika. Hehe I couldn't help but laugh :). Poor Ranma though, I hope he doesn't go totally over the edge because of this. Anyways, till next time. Keep up the good work! (and update soon please, I do ever so love this :) -Ph34r |
Innortal chapter 6 . 7/5/2007 Great work on this saga. Looking forward to more, and if Ranma ever tries to become the man he once was. |
Ph34r Productions chapter 5 . 6/13/2007 Ok... first I'm going to start out with a 'WOW'. This is awsome! I mean like 'Omg, how have I never read this before?' awsome. I LOVE this. I probably should have reviewed each chapter (or at least taken the time to review So Be It) but I just couldn't take the time to actually STOP reading! I sat down today at around noon determind to find a great Ranma Fanfiction, and after a couple of failed reads I stumbled upon So Be It. I'd started the first chapter many times, but for some reason I could never finish it. Well I did. Then I finished the next chapter. Then the next. And before I knew it, my dad was yelling at me that dinner was ready. I had done literally NOTHING besides read your story ALL DAY. THAT is how good it was. After dinner it was more of the same until I finished it. Then I started reading this at around 11:20 pm. And now I've just finished with the last chapter at 2:25 am. I CANNOT wait for your next chapter of this... I havn't been this involved with a story since I first read... well since I first read the Just Wont Die series. Or the Hearts of Ice. Or Path of Chaos: assention to suppremecy. Update soon please, I need my new drug! -Ph34r Productions |
Mesterio chapter 5 . 3/27/2007 Ok, just to let you know...the way you've written your story can be very confusing at times, the transition from the more simple and well known areas such as scenes with fighting, talking or description are easy to understand, but when you switch to talking about this separate world its as if you jump into a situation were only those writing the story understand whats going on. Some more correlation between character introduction and their relation to the current scene would help alot. Maybe i'm just getting lost in your writing, but that how it seems to me. -aside from that note great chapter, love how dramatice and intracit this story is getting. |
MeatLips chapter 5 . 3/2/2007 One word comes to mind at this story and at its prequel: Whoa. The way you've mixed Ranma 1/2, Sailor Moon, and Wheel of Time... It's like they actually FIT together! It really is amazing. Before I read your stuff, I would have considered combining these three stories akin to mixing hot dogs and fried chicken with fine caviar in a blender. However, the way you've managed to weave these stories together... wow. Ranma has become the absolutely coolest character in all three stories. I really love how you've developed these characters. I've never watched any Sailor Moon before, and I've never read the manga, but I really FEEL for Usagi. That's some real heavy shit to have riding on your shoulders. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! |
Zsych chapter 5 . 3/1/2007 Interesting. Can't say I'm really interested in the Sailor Moon parts, but overall... I quite like the story. I'd like a greater focus on Ranma with WoT characters though. |
Sopchoppy chapter 5 . 2/26/2007 good chapter, glad to have an update, can't wait for the next |
Wonderbee31 chapter 5 . 2/26/2007 Wow, looks like things are going to get even crazier there, and will be looking forward to what happens to Ranma next time. |
Cthreen chapter 5 . 2/25/2007 ... Wow ... This is one of the stories that makes all the browsing worthwhile. I would say more, but I really can't think of anything else to describe my awestruckness, if that's a word. Keep it up |