Reviews for Aftershock
Fenikkusuken chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Very, very nice. Excellent manipulation of words to create strong images... 'quickflicker' as only one example. Liked it very much.
Raihu chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
This goes without saying, but you have a knack for writing dark Kohakucentric stories. It's kind of eerie, really; but I'm definitely not complaining.

It's my opinion that Kagura, Kohaku and Sango make up ::the:: most potentially potent love triangle imaginable. Though it's not often addressed, or falls into a more implicit category, there's something to be said for the fierce love a little boy can feel for family and enemies alike. Something about this fic touched on that, just in the mention of relief and torment combined.

You, m'lady, are never allowed to stop writing trapped!Kohaku. D
existence92 chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Amazing description, but I feel that you should have exponded more on this. Maybe you could add on Kagura's point of view too?