|Reviews for Unattainable|
| Rose-Aki chapter 4 . 3/25
I liked the way you portrayed Musa and Riven and the way they confessed their feelings to each other really fitted them. Good story :)
| chickensmoothie1 chapter 4 . 9/26/2013
I absolutely love it. Especially the ending. I adore your style of writing and can't get enough of your MxR stories. You write them so well, and amazingly. I like how when you describe them when they're kissing also, because compared to other authors, you don't just describe how they kiss, you describe how they feel, and how the kissing impacts their emotions. I also like:
- how you describe small events/things with great detail, it make the story seem more realistic and believable
- how when you create other characters that aren't part of the actual show, you give them personality, but you don't ramble on for ages about them either. (Like in Memory Box chapter 1: Nessa, Pia, Sirusa etc.)
Basically I absolutely love your stories, you are my favourite author of all time, and you should never stop writing (especially MxR stories :P)
| xxxMusarockz chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
Absolutely loved it! Their dialogue was always in character, their cute moments had me melting and the action and unexpectedness of everything kept me on edge. This was brilliant; everything from the plot to the writing. I don't know how I missed this story in my early days of reading pretty much all the Musa and Riven stuff on here! I'll say it again: loved it!
| musa lover chapter 4 . 3/18/2013
I am in love with this story. You captured the characters perfectly and the detail and vocab was incredible. I had better go or il be here all day!
ps: Can you do another Musa centered one while they are still at school?
| AngelCutie ChildAtHeart chapter 4 . 12/29/2012
Wow, you're an AMAZING writer! I LOVE you stories! This story is awesome! You've captured the characters so exact and its so impressive(:
| Liliana-chan chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
Sorry for the incredibly short review. It's 2:48 pm right now and I'm tired.
I loved your planned-as-a-one-shot-but-transformed-into-a-multi-chap MusaRiven fanfiction! Remind me to elaborate after a good 8-10 hours of sleeping ;)
| Winx-Chick chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I tottally loved it! I just want to read it again! Musa and Riven are my tots favourite characters! :D :P
See Ya Later,
| aureliareneegmail.com chapter 4 . 5/12/2012
Epiloige! You should so do one! Like what happens at RF after wards, or what happens when the Winx read Musa's note. LOVED THIS STORY! You should write a sequel like the witches come and try to kill her again ir something. Note: i am a bad story person.
| AdorableAsian child3 chapter 4 . 1/27/2012
wow amazing story! amzain from beginin til end! luv pls continue ur writing especially Musa and Riven fanfics!3333
Lots of love,
-AdorableAsain child 3
| kisa180 chapter 3 . 1/18/2012
Do u plan to add more to this story
| Eliza chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
This story had me grinning like crazy as the end neared. No matter how dysfunctional they relationship is, they're still so perfect for each other. I really like how Riven has his own way of doing romance, but it's still as sweet (if not sweeter) than anything else. That was just such a great story; thanks so much for the great read!
| Eliza chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
Along with what I previously said, may I say that I really love some of the lines in this? For example:
“It was there for a good reason and it only had to last until he was graduated and then he would be free of her once and for all."
"’Yeah, well, I'm sorry for caring. You obviously don't want my emotions, even though I was willing to give them to you without expecting you to reciprocate them. But you want to die alone, so who am I to ruin your life's ambition.’"
"’You can't love someone and not want them to love you back, Musa. You're just opening yourself for a world of hurt.’"
“She was babbling to cover up the hurt, he knew her well enough to tell. However, he couldn't ease that pain anymore than he could relieve the constriction in his heart. He had his obligations and his pride and matters of the heart had no place in his world.”
| Eliza chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
I can't believe how well you can actually articulate how complex they're relationship is. You're able to understand and relay all the raw layers and overlapping of emotions. In a way, they're so similar, but Riven's just asking for the hard way while Musa can see how simply thing's could really be. But then again, if thing's were made simple, then it just wouldn't be Riven now would it? They both hide how they really feel, but in the end they're just a mess inside. I love the story so far; this is the first multi-chapter Riven/Musa story that I could find that actually was (a) grammatically correct, (b) had a very nice and rich writing style, and (c) actually had real emotion in it. It's really a great read, and I love how you're able to express all this and still keep interest without using much dialogue. As a writer, I do the same thing and am sparse with dialogue, but sometime's I get afraid of losing the interest of my readers, but that really doesn't seem to be the case with you.
| oh-tangled chapter 4 . 9/10/2011
(puts story and author in favorites without hesitation)
| satomika chapter 4 . 8/8/2011
i love it, actually!