|Reviews for Colonel Mustang’s Observations of a Shrimp|
| miss-meowness chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
Oh wow. xD This is beautiful. Thank you for writing this, even though it seems so unfinished...it leaves my imagination running though about what might happen next. and alSO ROY YOU DORK WITH ALL THIS 'SUBJECT A' SHENANIGANS AND WOW. HE'S SO IMMATURE. SUBJECT A YOU'RE ALSO SO IMMATURE. THEY'RE BOTH SO-you know! FREAKING ADORABLE BESTIES LOOK AT THEM.-cough cough. Anyway, thank you for writing this, again, because I greatly appreciated it, as well as many other fma fans out there. :)
| OstensiblyInsane chapter 2 . 11/1/2013
god damn it IF I CAN'T PM YOU, I CAN STILL COMMENT! WHY DID YOU DISCONTINUE THIS, IT WAS THE FIRST THING TO GET ME TO LAUGH IN MONTHS!
| OstensiblyInsane chapter 4 . 11/1/2013
oha gidpd yeou breoke mhr liver grhis is the. meest coemdy evet sont typt. whie riting
| BlackCatRunning chapter 4 . 8/18/2013
This is both unique and hilarious! Wonderful job! I'm really enjoying this :3
| ZakuroU chapter 4 . 6/25/2013
I think you've owned 100 reviews quite nicely.
Your vocabulary is really impressive, and this story is freaking hilarious.
You don't hafta update, but seriously, I'd appreciate it.
| StarTrail chapter 4 . 5/30/2013
so i guess this fic is dead, since you haven't updated since 06...shame, it's really funny...
| StarTrail chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
oh jeezus this is hilarious!
| Beloved Daughter chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
I highly enjoyed reading this story. I'm sorry to read that you abandoned it (I checked your author's profile before writing a review).
Laughed so hard I almost cried. Thanks for writing and keeping this posted...
| bezawesome chapter 4 . 9/13/2012
This is so hilarious and simple. you keep them in character so well and I love how you call him Subject A. Ed really is a hyperactive teenager who sleeps a lot and you made it really funny in Roy's mind. LOVE IT! keep writing :)
| Aleca chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
Lollollollol this is awesome! Would Ed get sick from the rain and his automail?
| pwnsomelink chapter 4 . 6/27/2012
Oh jeez. I did the same thing with my Ramen, once. It melted a hole in my bowl...
| Accidental Child chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
I love this story! XD I hope that you write another chapter soon! XDDDDDDDDDDD
| Katerie T. Phillips chapter 4 . 5/28/2012
I do so love Ed and Mustang, especially the way they just can't seem to get along no matter what, even when Mustang's trying to help Ed, Ed just has to give him a hard time... Good job writing this. I think you captured their personalities, and what would happen if they lived together, rather perfectly.
| Do a Barrel Roll chapter 4 . 5/10/2012
Hyperactive Ed is always a fun time.
| NinjirateGirl chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
One of the best stories to grace Fanfiction! Very funny :)