Reviews for The Chamber of Ordeal
snow and the sea chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
I can't believe it. A poem! I'm sorry I have to laugh. Yeh...I'm at my dad's work, so is unblocked, but gmail is. lol.
Infallible.Mirage chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Uhm, hate to say it...but by making it rhyme you just...didn't use the best words. It seems really corny that's all.

Done my reviews! &I'm sorry the poem ones weren't very nice, but I just prefer your stories.
emphysema chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
cool. couplets. yay! i love the way the poem seems to fit with the canon ordeal.
Sera dy Relandrant chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Very nice rhyming - a bit childish, but very nice rhyming.
Madame-S-Butterfly chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Ordeal Poem, must have been hard! Good job at it!

-MSB