|Reviews for Her Heart|
| SoulTaken chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
Yep! Definetely good! I loved the story! Write more oneshots like this! or better, why don't you write a fic with more chapters huh? yep, nice done
| JoanNeko13 chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Your grammar sucks, but the story was pretty good. Although it feels like there's something missing...anyways, work on your grammar a little bit and keep up the great work.
| Professor Sage chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Oh la la! :: music note :: Kraineness! Pwns! A .. lot! n-n Nice ficcy! Ya did a good job, that'd be sweet if Kratos came back and they lived happily every after... :: dreamy eyes ::
Kaya: Dear me.. :: gives candy :: Good work, keep it up ~ Professor Sage
| Rofl Master chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Two minor grammar checks, unless u would want Kratos to be hitting Raine on her hair which would also be hitting her head and giving her a concussiong, then im fine with that. Hey she would die WITH LOVE, and that's what she wanted, LOL!
"Kratos' chest and let him strike her hair gently..." That's the line.
But im not that picky about grammar mistakes, unless ur fic was chock full of them, then i would.
YAY! Kraine! Though this was kinda more onesided i c. But it's alright. Though i would have wanted a reason as to why Raine would like Kratos, nonetheless the discriptions were awesome. And i laughed at the part where he would save her with Healing Stream and Panacea Bottles.
Nice and Cute! _