|Reviews for Sojourner Part 1: Day in the life|
| Shitennou Loki chapter 4 . 10/10/2007
Wow, from the depths of despair, the story lifts us to lofty heights in the realization that there is something more in who we are that keeps the dream and the magic alive and the way you ended that last chapter-epilogue was awesome! *hands you a magical talisman and bows* S.L.
| Shitennou Loki chapter 2 . 10/10/2007
Pathos and tragedy, again your writing is excellent, this reminding me of those tragic love poems of Japanese antiquity...you have fabulous visualization, an ability to hook the reader and affect and characterisation is first rate... fantastic, yet sad, *hands you a crystal quill and a magical sphere and bows* S.L.
| Shitennou Loki chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
This is a brilliant piece, it flows beautifully and your language and vocabulary is superb, 'careful of sentence fragments in one or two places, where a comma or - would suffice, but other than that, you write at a level that is worthy of print. *a Maple wand and bows* S.L.
| Saiyuki Tasuke chapter 4 . 7/4/2006
I didn't quite get this fic, but it's full of mystery.
I like it. Please continue.