And this is where I shall stop
When you change his sexuality unnecessarily

I just wanted to point this out cause it's interesting for me. The Title of this Fic is S.U.I.S. which Suis means "To Be". It's like quoting "To be, or not to be" in Shakespeare, and I feel like this is the Main Plot of the Story itself.

I do hope for Harmony aka Hermione x Harry as well because of it.

And I believe that it’s supposed to be Malkin’s..

The second year was Flophart and third year was Remus, and you have them swapped…

? there is nothig here...

thank you so much for this story..i just finished getting caught up on "brother of kastorbours" decided to see some of your other stories...im glad i did...Loved this.
thank you.

good story

Just for your information
Australia does not have private beaches, if you could walk the water line you could walk around Australia, all public land

Foal

Oh, I totally forgot this was a crossover

My only main question is why did he stop talking to the gods, he basically started talking with them then it basically never showed up again?

i hope there wont be anymore goblin stuff in the future, there is so much wrong here that i now have a headache.

I want to keep reading, I really do, but the manner you've done your dialog is darn near impossible to follow. It might work as a script for a show, where we'd have the benefit of body language, but in prose, it SUCKS.

My only real gripe is how Harry's attitude toward sex and sexuality has no narrative backing. It's one thing to have him exhibit strange behavior and promptly explain it. It's another thing entirely to have that behavior last for such a long time with nothing in the story to justify it.

Truly enjoying this. Would absolutely benefit from some serious proofreading, as there are sentences here and there that are completely unintelligible. The overall story, though, has so far made it worth ignoring the issues.