|Reviews for Very early, even|
| Libertad23 chapter 3 . 5/13/2006
Berry cute chapter! a man doing gardening what else could we ask for? Thanks for letting him live,
Good luck with your guinea pigs!
| theshadowcat chapter 3 . 5/13/2006
If you want to really drive V crazy, give him 13 Guinea Pigs. What in the world are you doing with 13 Guinea Pigs? On second thought, maybe I don't want to know.
Great chapter and I can't wait for more. So soon, please.
| Kai Fong chapter 3 . 5/13/2006
how cute _
| Redone chapter 3 . 5/13/2006
"if this be madness then I am mad, but I am in good company." :)
Very nice so far, am quite looking forward to next chapters. Why does V keep the vegetable patch dark? It should get lots of light.
| Mirror mask angel chapter 3 . 5/13/2006
Yay! it was so warm and cute . really liked this chapter
| BeliBali chapter 3 . 5/13/2006
Great. Very enjoyable. I like the garden concept. Again, excellent with V's language and with Evey's innocence as well. Keep going with this.
| Naphtali Phoenix chapter 2 . 5/11/2006
Alright, you've got me hooked, so now I must implore of you, more!
Okay, that aside I must agree with what others have pointed out that the second chapter seems terribly out of place. It is alright to jump back and forth in time but this jump seems a bit much. The lack of a transition or reference point makes it seem like it doesn't belong. Perhaps a very brief paragraph could go at the beginning to lead into the second chapter would help.
In any case the first chapter is quite adorable and I am happy to see V lives. :)
| Kai Fong chapter 2 . 5/10/2006
OMG! he got out!
| KELAndSoMuchMore chapter 2 . 5/10/2006
Chapter 1 was FANTASTIC. Beautifully written, captivating... very VERY nice.
But chapter 2 doesn't fit. o_O It feels like it should be an entirely different fic. Which would be nice, since I'd much rather you continue on chapter 1 in the same vane instead of turning it into a He Lives! fic. D:
| Frostbyte13 chapter 2 . 5/10/2006
I am enjoying your story very much. I definitley a very good story. I am looking forward to an update.
| Libertad23 chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
You're 1st chapter was cute! But I think you should have continued the 1st chapter, im a romantic fool hehe, and the 1nd chapter too short we want more! XOXO
| theshadowcat chapter 2 . 5/9/2006
Nice, but way too short. More soon I hope.
| Gargoyle20 chapter 2 . 5/9/2006
That's nice story. Last chapter was short. I hope there is a new chapter coming soon.
| Mirror mask angel chapter 2 . 5/9/2006
wow really good cant wait till next chapter
| brainfear chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Really liked it. More please!