Reviews for Relaxation
Red and Gold Phoenix chapter 10 . 7/30/2006
AW! Well the final chapter of this awsome story is completed. I think you alraedy know that I throughly enjoyed every chapter. I am so so so happy that Frank and Natarle are getting married! As mentioned Natarle and Murrue are going to be sister-in-laws! WOOT! That's exactly how it should be in my opinion! YEY! I am so excited for the up comeing sequal to A STORY OF HEROES! YEY! I can't wait! Anyway, I will always cherrish your writing and pairings! thank you for another EXCELLENT fic!

Red and Gold Phoenix chapter 9 . 7/22/2006
OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! FRANK PURPOSED TO NATARLE! IT WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY PERFECT! AW! My heart was in my throat when I realized that he was purposeing! I had to read the lines over and over again so that it registered! I actually cried! That was great! I AM SO HAPPY! Finally Natarle gets to be loved too! I loved it when Frank said that he would do anything for Natarle. I LOVE everything about their relationship. Frank has changed Natarle. Though she is still herself, Frank has managed to make her truly happy. She was never happy once in the show! NOT ONCE! As if to say that she was unable. I laugh at the people who made GS. I Like your version WAY WAY WAY (etc.) BETTER! I always pictured the purposel and Natarle crying.(SO DAMN AWSOME!) I can't wait for their wedding! WILL YOU WRITE ABOUT THE WEDDING! I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU DO! Just a question. Will Natarle tell her family? I don't know why I care so much about how Natarle's family would react to her getting married. I guess because she was brought up so strict. I also loved what Frank said about the club incident. I figured that if the jerk had shoved Natarle, Frank would have killed him.




NilName chapter 10 . 7/21/2006
That was a great ending to a great fic... Excellent.
irishdragon chapter 10 . 7/21/2006
Aw...the proposal scene was so cute. I'm glad Frank finally asked her. lol It's cool that Murrue and Natarle are gonna be sisters in law. Anyways, awesome work, and hope to see more soon. XD
SulliMike23 chapter 10 . 7/21/2006
A good story to the end. It's about time Frank proposed, I thought I was gonna go nuts if he didn't. Keep these kind of stories up man.
Red and Gold Phoenix chapter 8 . 7/20/2006
Wahoo! What a quick update! YEY! You did my nightclub request! I LOVED it! Mwu and Murrue danceing was so adorable! I was so happy that Stevy managed to release his song! I really hated that ass and his goons that Erica accidentally bumped into! When Frank got punched I wanted him to kill them all! However, I think it worked better that John made his dramatic entrance and kicked their asses; after all Erica is his wife. John was awsome, but something tells me that he is a coordinater.

I can't belive that the resort is almost over! It seems that it went by so fast! Frank is running out of time to perpose to Natarle at the resort, if he even does in this fic at all. Now that he has a black eye, he may want to wait. Anyway, I can't wait for another update! PLEASE DO! I MUST HAVE MORE!

SulliMike23 chapter 8 . 7/18/2006
Well, that WAS eventful. I hope they won't get in trouble for it or they can cut this vacation short.
irishdragon chapter 8 . 7/18/2006
Whoa...what a fight. lol Awesome work, and can't wait for more.
Red and Gold Phoenix chapter 7 . 7/16/2006
FINNALY! I can review. Sorry about late review, I had computer problems! YEY! I am SO hAPPY that you updated! It seemed like it has been an eternity! (even though it wasn't!) ANyway I loved this cahapter! I really enjoyed the beach. It was nice to see Murrue and Naterle hang out. The same for Frank and Mwu too. It ticked me off a lot in the show because I felt that Natarle and Murrue's friendship was completly unimportent! I mean they were both together on the ARCHANGEL! They fought together, and that matters! Anyway, I also thought Frank's answer to Mwu's question about the perposel was really good. Though they both LOVE each other, Natarle and Frank's relationship is different from Murrue's and Mwu's. It is NATARLE after all. anyway, I can't wait to see how Frank perposes to Natarle even if it isn't in this story. IT'S GOING TO BE SO GOD! LOVE YA! PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE!

SulliMike23 chapter 7 . 7/15/2006
Another good chapter, but Frank has to ask Natarle sooner or later.
Seigi-san chapter 7 . 7/15/2006
Yay! You updated! Lol at Mwu getting sunburned on his honeymoon..sounds like just the kind of thing he'd do XD. Glad to see more Natarle, too. I hope he asks her soon...I'm really looking forward to that!

Please update again soon!
irishdragon chapter 7 . 7/14/2006
Nice to see an update. XD Loved the little scene on the beach. It's just like Mwu to forget about putting on sun screen. lol

Awesome work, and hope to see more soon.
LightningGemini chapter 7 . 7/14/2006
In the show, Erica is married and has a son.
Legion of Light chapter 6 . 6/29/2006
Great story. Keep up the excellent work and UPDATE!
animeboy-12 chapter 6 . 6/9/2006
if there is a porn version of that fic...i'll buy's very intersting though...keep it up.
42 | Page 1 .. Last Next »