|Reviews for I capture the castle|
| Snow Leopard Pasha chapter 17 . 4/26
You really need to get back to writing!
There've been a few things about Harry's behavior I didn't understand (like at the grocery store, if he meant to put out the shop-keeper, why didn't he knock over a rack or shelf instead of destroying his and Snape's paid for food?), but it's fairly well-written.
| marthapreston4 chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
I get that you were keeping harry in the dark but they way you wrote I was super confused
| hpsslily chapter 17 . 7/18/2014
Absolutely love d fact dat ur story is so realistic
But y did u take away Harry's green eyes...his mum is still d same
And I would like more harry Snape rather than d neighborhood kids u know
Anyways plzzzzzz update
P.S. don't kill dumbledore!
| Flummox chapter 17 . 7/31/2013
I have been rereading this lately and I really, really miss it. Are you planning on making it a priority when you keep working on your other stories?
| The arithmancer chapter 17 . 7/2/2013
Are you going to finish this? Or is it abandoned?
It's very different, would like to know where it's going
| sarahsezlove chapter 17 . 6/9/2013
Such a shame this was never finished, but I'll follow, just in case.
| wandamarie chapter 17 . 9/16/2012
please up date when you can thanks
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| wandamarie chapter 13 . 9/16/2012
Harry needs to get a spanking it was a good chapter thanks
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| wandamarie chapter 8 . 9/16/2012
wow it is getting good
| wandamarie chapter 5 . 9/16/2012