Reviews for Grandiose |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! I thought I would maybe like this one, but the ending sorta ruined it. Yami wouldn't be that cruel. DX I understand this might be for some humor, but that just hurt. Poor Seto. Note: I am a Seto fan to the end... except some of the things I read and like are even worse than this and more insane for that matter... maybe that's the problem, there needs to more of this and more insanity! XD |
![]() ![]() That was really good. I especially liked the big reveal at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You manage to impress me even when it comes to dragon-boy. I can't say I'm too fond of Kaiba, so maybe that's why I like this story; or maybe it's just that you're an excellent writer. Anyway, thank for the story. Also, the last part confused me a bit. Was Yami real, or does Yugi have multiple personalities? I liked it as an ending, but if you ever get inspired than please write a continuation about what's going on. In fact, that could actually get really interesting because multiple personality syndrome is usually triggered by a traumatic event, so both the background and how Yugi manages to hide it from his grandpa and friends might make an interesting one shot...or maybe not. I just like Yugi best. ;; |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is beyond human,yugioh,and ka understanding i shun you as an athour and wil spit in dicust when i hear kitt chaois |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, oh my god, the ENDING! So awesome! I love it! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Scary. I don't like Seto all insane. It's kind of beyond creepy. O.o But it was still a very entertaining read! And that last Yugi scene: LOL! I kinda want a second chapter in which, it turns out he's insane too! Maybe split personality? But anyway, good writing! I enjoyed it! ~Bubbles |
![]() ![]() ![]() O_o WAH! So Yugi's crazy, too? *Twilight Zone music* NIce fic. Very interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor kiba |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow! that was an awesome plot twist right there at the end! but...yami in a...papp-mache puzzle? XD XD XD and it was strange that he would react so stringly just bacause of a fake card...then again, its probably seasonzero!yami we have here and he ROCKS. cool work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda late for a review but this story is still something. Wow is all I gotta say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'm filling my Sunday morning by reading your stuff! It's like finding a whole new series of books to read - I love it. This was funny and sad all at once. You find yourself smiling at the situation and how the scenes must have played out (I can picture his poor Science teacher having to cope with his rooftop antics!) but then you feel sorry for Seto and his family. Good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, too good. And wouldn't it be funny if the madness was real? I mean, if they could do what they thought, but not HOW they thought... I'm blabbering. Nevermind. Very, very good. Manga Yami at the end? It sounded like it to me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() very funny... I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Starts cracking up* Kitt, you rock! |
![]() ![]() Wow. I can honestly say I've never seen anything remotely like this before. Very, very cool! It's amazing how it was all so very plausible...I'd never thought of that, but it's a wonderful point, how this would all look if his mind wasn't seeing events from the same dimension as his body. And that ending...this, we file under 'uh oh'! |