|Reviews for Running on Empty|
| GinnyPotter95 chapter 17 . 6/19/2014
That is one hell of a story. I spend the better part of the whole afternoon reading it. I just couldn't stop reading. It never got boring and I kind of like the idea of the story. It's pretty realistic that Rodney tries to solve this with his brain, but also that he thinks about what Sheppard would do. It's kind of his surviaval skill or the fighter in him. Sheppard's logical side is Rodney, that amazed me. But I wondered how some normal rope is capable of holding a flying dart, but oh well this is fiction after all. ;)
I love this fanfic. I just love it. And I loved the twist with the kids. It was kinda funny.
| danceofshadows chapter 17 . 1/4/2014
| Zan Evans chapter 17 . 1/15/2013
Very possibly the best and most realistic fanfiction I have ever read, and I spend a good deal of time on this site. While a decent lot of fanfiction may be awful, I continue to spend hours filtering though that mess with the intent to find stories just like this. Completely worth the read, and the time it took to do so.
| xXxrouxXx chapter 17 . 8/28/2011
You know, with all that sap at the end I was half expecting Rodney to go 'You know you were right. We are brothers.' That sorta thing woulda made my little heart flutter and cause me to squeal and whimper in happiness. Anyway, for all the time it took to read, I loved it :D Good job!
| xXxrouxXx chapter 2 . 8/27/2011
"I stayed calm in a virtual environment infested with Wraith on a ship that was about to get blown out of the sky." What episode is this...if it even is an episode xD Love this idea by the way, and Rodney's pov is great :D
| Noxbait chapter 17 . 5/7/2011
Very nice story! had me on the edge of my seat. i love the kids!
| Monetary Value chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
I read this entire story cover to cover.
I have to say that it was incredible. It was hilarious. It was sad and touching and amusing and entertaining and my most favorite fanfiction out of every damn fanfiction in every damn fandom that I have ever read in my entire damn lifetime.
And I've read thousands. I'm serious.
I love the way you wrote the characters, kept the story interesting, and developed the plot lines.
Out of ten I would give this no less than a thousand.
You're an incredible writer.
Just thought you'd like to know.
| Whirlwind421 chapter 17 . 10/11/2010
Brilliant! I love it! It's awesome! I loved all the amnesa stuff. Very interesting. Especially after Rondey met up with John. And I really liked the kid stuff too. Sometimes the end of the story is the best part. I loved when John said after Carson that Rodney was hovering. That cracked me up.
"I'm not done being mad at you for making me cry, you ass." Great line. Love it.
| Sharpe's Hussy chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
Fascinating as it is Sheppard and McKay's POV as they struggle to make some sense of it all, knowing perfectly that they are runners now.
I also find the scenery lovely.
It is very reminiscent of what we might see up here in Oregon.
| Sharpe's Hussy chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Oh my word! A runner?
You mean like Ronon?
This IS good...
| lilawonder chapter 17 . 6/27/2010
OMG... I am in awe of you. * sigh * I long to be able to write something as good as this. I loved how you whumped both of them and threw in a little unexpected anaphalactic reaction in the mix!
Thanks for a great experience.
| WickedBlue chapter 17 . 5/28/2010
Awe, that was so cool. Thank you very much.
| hajimebassaidai chapter 17 . 4/29/2010
This was a brilliant adventure with lots of angst and friendship moments thrown in! Really enjoyed it!
| hajimebassaidai chapter 11 . 4/29/2010
I like how they fall back into bickering with each other and that John assumes they're brothers. In many ways they do get along like they are.
| hajimebassaidai chapter 4 . 4/29/2010
There may not have been much action in the last two chapters but they were far from empty. McKay's self-examination is nicely done, as is his realisation that fighting is really John's department so he falls back on his own strengths instead of trying to be someone he's not.