|Reviews for Helping Hand|
| azerjaban chapter 11 . 1/24
Thus was a sweet story. With funny moments in between all the angst to keep me smiling. I loved what was going on in the gryfindore commen room this last chapter.
| smilingcrescent chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
I love your Ron. He's really wonderful here. True to character, and heroic in his own way. Great job!
And Hermione is perfect too- you have their characters down to a tee.
| Lily13 chapter 11 . 6/24/2013
this was AWESOME! just so incredibly CUTE!
| Bela Vosa chapter 11 . 6/24/2013
You made me cry... Good job!
| Ileah chapter 11 . 1/15/2013
This was not nearly as humorous as I was hoping for. It was more along the lines of angsty. It was good or I wouldn't have kept reading, but it was sad in the middle.
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 11 . 11/11/2012
| Reader's Daughter chapter 11 . 11/5/2012
best trio fic ever
| revolverrevolutions chapter 11 . 10/11/2012
Awww so soooo heartwarming it's adorable and sweet and aaa It makes me happy :)!
| MelodySong231 chapter 11 . 8/8/2012
I absolutely love this story. Wanted to review on every chapter but at camp there's shitty reception and i'm lucky to even get some. Anywho, just wanted to say, love this fic, so touching and a refreshing fic where the trio actually gets along. although i do like to read a good ron!bashing fic once and a while, haha urgh gtg keep up the good work!
| mysteriouslife chapter 11 . 8/4/2012
Wow. Just wow.
I've been looking for a good story all day; anything that will at least hold my attention for longer than a few chapters...but this... Wowwww..
Brilliant! Really. I love this story! So very, very much...
Please keep writing. I really loved how strong their friendship was, and your Ron is truly phenomenal! Oh, and the comedy with Neville as the eligible bachelor was hilarious, and it definitely kept me reading.
Keep up the good work.
| Bagoosa chapter 11 . 7/24/2012
This story was really one in a million. I mean, most stories leave out the friendship between the trio, but you really capture it. I really like Ron. Most authors see him as selfish or whiny or comic relief, but you really emphasized that he's a brother, a friend, and a very loyal person. The only thing that kept me from reading this straight through was pizza (I was hungry), and even that didn't keep me away for long. I thoroughly enjoyed this. :)
| empresskitsune chapter 11 . 6/4/2012
Awwww, how cwoot :3
| Lilybet chapter 11 . 3/29/2012
That is a really good story. I love the plot line.
My favourite lines:
"This isn't the Room of Requirement, it's Lake Windermere on a bloody Bank Holiday!" (because it shows you know this country ;)
"you cad!" (because it's just so brilliant)
If he had been an Animagus, his Animagus form at that moment would have been one huge question mark (because it made me laugh and have a wonderful image in my head)
My critism is that you didn't stick to third person but kept switching between first and third, and between different people's first person narration. If you wanted to make it better then you could change it all to third person narrative.
Absolutely funny, laugh out loud most certainly, and fantastic bonding at the end. Sometimes harry just needs to be told things!
Nice one. LB
| Ciekawa Osoba chapter 11 . 12/3/2011
I can't help but say... the very last sentence ruined it for me. You had crafted a certain atmosphere that the last line rendered... trite? Cliche? A mix of the two. I would go back and change it.
But greatly enjoyed reading this.
| HeyI'mTalkingToYou chapter 11 . 11/27/2011
This is adorable. Just downright wonderful. Your characterizations of the trio are spot-on. And I loved all the funny bits-especially Marietta!