|Reviews for Maybe|
| anaemicfaeries chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
We love Okita.
And we love this.
Quite simple, ne? _
It's nice to see some romance from you! And you write it so well too. Love how it had their thoughts, which weren't so different after all..and the recurring 'maybes' and your descriptions...
Lovely. Definite favourite.
| Hitoezakura chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
I loved it! I loved the double POV aspect of it, and you captured Kaya and Okita beautifully! It was amazing! Thank you so much for creating this work!
In addition, I liked how you put them in the Bakumatsu. It was a great setting!
Anyways, it's a good thing you took liberties with how they met, because...well...(looks away guiltily) I haven't really decided that (and they meet in two of my fics, so I have to make up two different meetings).
Anyways, thanks again, and I really loved this fic!
| charmed-sword chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
It amazes me when people can convey so much in a hundred words. I couldn't do it to save my life! _
I haven't read the story, but now I'm intrigued...
I love how they each want to approach each other...and the repetition of 'maybe'...and the references to smiling...and then that end line...gosh, it's so good.
| White Rabbit Tale chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Wow! I've never seen a two-pov fic pulled off so neatly. Great, great work. The repitition was just enough to drive the whole thing home, and not too much as to be annoying.
I like the difference in their thoughts, too. Kaya's is a little more centered, and Okita's seems more sporadic, desperate.
I can just see the moment when he looks up and their eyes meet...
Very well done.
Now where's that Tsu/Shishio fic?
| SiriusFan13 chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
interesting. nice job rendering two voices in a 100 word ficlet. and i like the idea of au-ing an au to return it to cannon. i can't say much more, as i'm not yet familiar with the original fic... but i like this...
| shara gurl chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
(does first review dance) What can I say amazing fic really great. Ur standered never seems to go is someone i no very little about, but like all the Fic again makes me want to read "How Is This Love?" and I will. One Last time Loved more soon look forward to reading more