|Reviews for War Of The Champions|
| Ottsel Cath chapter 45 . 12/21/2016
This story gave justice to Back to you. It was simply incredible and I love how you added your touch to the game's story to make it more realistic. I've played the series in French and your stories made me realize how much stuff was lost in translation. It was like I was rediscovering the games. Your writing skills are fantastic and I loved the humore you added to each chapter. I can't wait to start reading the sequel to this even if it sounds heartbreaking. I am so glad I stumbled upon your stories and I will more than gladly read more from you!
| Sk8rshark chapter 45 . 3/19/2015
Why the hell can I only favorite this story once? It's way, way, way too incredible to merely be favorite once.
| Guest chapter 45 . 2/21/2015
I find it ironic that Damas wanted his son to be named after Jak when his son was in fact Jak
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/19/2014
By Bruce from finding nemo -eragon fan33
| Guest chapter 36 . 10/17/2014
Ikr I've only seen fealty in eldest
| JGM16 chapter 45 . 5/29/2014
Sappy, Cheesy, but still a great story
| HavenHearts chapter 45 . 5/3/2014
So yeah... Will there ever be a sequel?
| Guest chapter 45 . 4/16/2014
the entire paradox thing is confusing, jak got his name because samos knew prince mar would grow up to be jak? there must of been something to set the paradox in motion. I read a interesting fic a couple years ago where the precursors made keira onin after she and jak grew up in the future thus setting the paradox in motion because onin/keira was in the past and sent jak in to the past so he could grow up to be the man who would later send himself in the future thus completing the paradox
| dkmonster chapter 11 . 8/16/2013
when you said war of champions i thought you ment something way off from jak3
| dkmonster chapter 4 . 8/16/2013
ithink that this is jak3
| DarkDevil88 chapter 23 . 4/14/2013
I love your little lines you write at the end of each chapter.. Your so adorable! ;)
| ThoseLittleAnodynes chapter 45 . 3/30/2013
Im loooooving this! Thank GOOODNESS theres a sequel! !
| jessi chapter 45 . 3/14/2013
Another great story which I really liked!
| jaqjaq123 chapter 45 . 4/7/2012
i say to jak, who care, LES says jump and you jump
and the everyone else in jak universe, who cares what you think
i say sequel, hehe, but im accepting is you and "muse" dont really want to write one but it would be interesting to read
overall its a good story and i quite liked it, just a pity there is no more stories, i have read of the good jak series fan fic :( but i dont know how to be creative to write my own :(
i loved the stories, and im reading other ones of your and avater marriage is an interesting one
| jaqjaq123 chapter 20 . 4/3/2012
haha, i love the banter between dark, light (pussy) and jak (retard) it is so hilarious, haha
you could totally write a story just on the banter :P
if you decide not too, can i write it? it would be wicked fun, hehe
anyway, loving the story