Reviews for War Of The Champions
Sk8rshark chapter 45 . 3/19
Why the hell can I only favorite this story once? It's way, way, way too incredible to merely be favorite once.
Guest chapter 45 . 2/21
I find it ironic that Damas wanted his son to be named after Jak when his son was in fact Jak
Guest chapter 14 . 12/19/2014
By Bruce from finding nemo -eragon fan33
Guest chapter 36 . 10/17/2014
Ikr I've only seen fealty in eldest
JGM16 chapter 45 . 5/29/2014
Sappy, Cheesy, but still a great story
HavenHearts chapter 45 . 5/3/2014
So yeah... Will there ever be a sequel?
Guest chapter 45 . 4/16/2014
the entire paradox thing is confusing, jak got his name because samos knew prince mar would grow up to be jak? there must of been something to set the paradox in motion. I read a interesting fic a couple years ago where the precursors made keira onin after she and jak grew up in the future thus setting the paradox in motion because onin/keira was in the past and sent jak in to the past so he could grow up to be the man who would later send himself in the future thus completing the paradox
dkmonster chapter 11 . 8/16/2013
when you said war of champions i thought you ment something way off from jak3
dkmonster chapter 4 . 8/16/2013
ithink that this is jak3
DarkDevil88 chapter 23 . 4/14/2013
I love your little lines you write at the end of each chapter.. Your so adorable! ;)
ThoseLittleAnodynes chapter 45 . 3/30/2013
Im loooooving this! Thank GOOODNESS theres a sequel! !
jessi chapter 45 . 3/14/2013
Another great story which I really liked!
jaqjaq123 chapter 45 . 4/7/2012
i say to jak, who care, LES says jump and you jump

and the everyone else in jak universe, who cares what you think

i say sequel, hehe, but im accepting is you and "muse" dont really want to write one but it would be interesting to read

overall its a good story and i quite liked it, just a pity there is no more stories, i have read of the good jak series fan fic :( but i dont know how to be creative to write my own :(

i loved the stories, and im reading other ones of your and avater marriage is an interesting one
jaqjaq123 chapter 20 . 4/3/2012
haha, i love the banter between dark, light (pussy) and jak (retard) it is so hilarious, haha

you could totally write a story just on the banter :P

if you decide not too, can i write it? it would be wicked fun, hehe

anyway, loving the story
jaqjaq123 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
on your A/N i wouldnt know,

i havent been able to keep a relationship for more than i week

damn im jealous of jak, im just as much as a freak as he is, but he still gets a girl :(

but i read "back to you" all in one night, i couldnt put it put it down (which makes sense because i am reading on my laptop, hehe)

the storys are great, and i enjoyed the jak games (only havent played the first, i have played 2, 3 and X) and this really helps to feel apart of it
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