Reviews for Human Condition
WeaponsMisstressTenten chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
I love LightxMisaxL threesome stories. :) This was very well done.

The part where Light admitted that they were as close as they were far apart really hit me. You can describe things in an absolutley beautiful way.
tlcplusp chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
This is really good. It's beautiful. :)

I really like how you describe Misa and L and Light being about as close together as possible and yet as far apart as they were close. That's gorgeous.

Sorry, I can't think out reponses right now, my brain is running sans sleep..:(
phoenix of hell chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Even though it was angst, it also had a little hope in it. Indeed, what a strange trio they are. I think is difficult to portray the relationships between all three of them, but you made a fine job.
MiyakoHasegawa chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Your fic is an unexpected piece of treasure! How I found it.. never mind. It's wonderfully written. There's a kind of hopelessness to it, which is only befitting to Death Note. The only thing slightly off is Misa. I suppose I didn't see it in her being that helpful. Very good story!
Itallia chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
I like the theme, though I still can't see the "pairing" (or any in Death Note, really). This was well written, too. Good job.
bittersweet dreams chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Woo, something like a threesome. XD

I really like this, the whole fact that no matter how much they try to be friends, in the end, it's not possible. It's the whole tragedy in their character? or something, I don't really know it myself, but I think it's a great side of all three characters that you wrote, the part of them that just wants to be close to everyone, and live a normal life and the other part that can't let that happen because that's just how they are as people. /

Favourited (and this review is long. o.O)
Kokis chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Weey!

I heard from Futurefreaked that you were amazing at writing and now you've proven that you really are!

This story is really really good! I love the fact that it is not a yaoi (I mean ,I sure love to read yaoi) but it's very cool and very relieving to find those few rare pieces that are cute and loving without having a lot of romance in them too.

Adding this to my favs!

L LIVES FOREVER!
Occurs chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
Misa/Raito/L are the perfect threesome, and I wish there were more fics of all of them together. This was excellent, thank you!
TheFutureFreaksMeOut chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Oh, I finally understand this. (I've begon to read Death Note)... I've read this story before, just because I love your style of writing, but now it makes so much more sense knowing the characters and all. And eh, Ebony... you're the best. You're writing is just amazing... and as another reviewer said, the whole story had this dreamy auroa. Lovely!
Laryna6 chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
This is beautifully done. The use of italics, often used for dreams, gives it a dreamlike touch, appropraite since this is a brief moment of awakeness.
someone chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
wow i love this fic it's written so beautifully. congrats on giving birth to a beautiful fic.
Dreammistress Jade chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
You know what I was just thinking? You've developed a very distinctive writing style. even if I didn't get the name of the author in my author alert I think I'd be able to figure out you wrote this after reading it. Congratulations.

Toodles!