Reviews for Watch For Me By Moonlight
Wynni chapter 1 . 2/12
Sigh, it cleverly sounds like Sarah can't make up her mind. She wasn't happy underground, but she's not really doing much better in the real world, if that conversation with Emma is anything to go by.

Pick a world, Sarah!
babyvfan chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
This was awesome
moira hawthorne chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
ooooooooooooooooooooooo thats sad... beautiful and soul wrenchingly sad...

and of course the poem I memorized it as a child of 7ish all on my own... I still have that book of Poems of Adventure that was my father school book decades before my birth
btw its blue aswell
nekochan1994 chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
Love Love Love Love LOVE!
nhrc chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Wai To me & Wai my heart.
TashaRose chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
So hopeful, and then so sad yet touched with something else. Well written.
FrancesOsgood chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
And again, you have left me grasping for words. Beautifully done! You have a knack for making the reader feel everything along with the characters. You create an atmosphere of romance without silly fluff and senseless dialogue or innuendo. That's a rare find among fic writers, so Bravo!

*By the way, I've always loved "The Highwayman." I remember reciting it Anne Shirley style when I was younger.
donewiththissite chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
I really enjoyed this. There's such a dreamy, romantic quality to this, but Sarah leaving was so true. She needed to. Jareth being patient and waiting was also true to his nature.
MayGirl85 chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
You write such sad and beautiful stories. One day maybe youll take pity on us poor readers and give us a happy ending.
Bella Trakiul chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
*sobs* WHY ARE YOU TORTURING ME SO? I read JS fanfiction to help me cope with the fact that they never actually were together! WHY?! but I would like to say that it was beautifully written
Bella Cuore chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I immediately recognized the reference to "The Highwayman", one of my favorites as well. I am glad this one did not end the same.
FeyFaerie chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
I loved it, but it was pretty sad :(
animegus farmus chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
If this is what you consider unpolished and rushed, what on earth do you consider as not? I love the dreamlike quality, and the fact that Sarah remains so very human in her need to change and grow (forever 18? *shudder* far to young to make that a permanent decision). I like to chose to think that someday, however...

She is, after all, waiting.
The.Lost.Thoughts chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
There's the angst I know and love! I don't know, endings like this ring more true for me. Like Jareth and Sarah were always meant to be together, but then never really CAN be. There'll always be something in the way.

But then again I like to torture my characters so...yeah. Maybe I just get some sick pleasure out of a not so happy ending.
MaXdana chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I felt so clever knowing that the title was a line in 'The Highwayman'. You stole my thunder. LOL.

For a oneshot, this was fantastic. Lot's of emotion was put into it. I almost cried when Sarah left Jareth, but I've thought the same thing as well - the whole change bit. I actually loved how the end left you hanging.

Also, the song 'Underground' was playing though my head as I read this because a few lyrics tie in nicely. 'No one can blame you for walking away...'

I still need to finish 'End of Days,' but you have another fic that has caught my attention, so I think I'll check it out.


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