Reviews for Burn
satomika chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Haha

Nice!

But…

What was pinching her ass?
MissRose727 chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Well written smut :-) loved it and I loved the combined powers part too!
PanUchiha7105 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Last four lines... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Made it so much better XD
Awesome story! Until next time!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
LOVED IT
electrospooks chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I loved it! Write more!
SlytherinBitchOnFire aka KT chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
"So."

Layla smiled weakly. "So."

"We never got your skirt off."

"So that's what was pinching my ass."

"Uhhh...no."

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I'm laughing so fucking hard right now...

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KT
Queen of Night chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Ha! That last line was hilarious!
little art rat chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
That was sexy funny hot as hell i like the idea of his and hers powers mixing seming up the room the ieve growing up the wall the fire cumeing form ther skin and at the fated that he did her with his jeans on i always fond that to be hot 2 thums up
Momose Airay chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
... (Blink, blink) ... AWESOME! Please continue to write.
alykat14 chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Haha, I liked it a lot!
ItaSaku1 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Wow amazing.

Truly thought the last sentence was way to funny!
Princess Of Souls chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
;) !
VampbaitInfinity chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
D: . . . . .this. . . . .is. . . . . OMF CULD U PLLLLZZZZZ MAKE ME ONE USING MY OC? PLLLLZZZZZ? DX I LOVED THIS!
AliMariexxx chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Wow this was really good! Wish we could see their relationship develop more after this...thanks
poetikxtragedy89 chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Brilliant. Bravo. :]
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