Reviews for Collateral
Sheo Darren chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
A grim tale that just shows you that while you're saving someone, other people aren't being saved- or worse.
Andrew Joshua Talon chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
LMAO, indeed. I too have wondered about all that damage they leave behind. And what it's affects are on the present day. I mean, okay, the time travel bit is rather unexplained, but still! Even after 500 years SOMETHING those crazy kids did has to be left.
Raine chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
You are EVIL, you know that! Who else would have thought up that? I already decided that the moral of Inuyasha was "don't be a villager", but this brings new meaning. You're sick dude. .
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
There does seem to be a lot collateral damage. Those scenes were:Miroku's intro, Sesshoumaru stealing the Tessaiga and Kouga and Rin's entrance. I feel really bad for Satoshi but the way you described the mountain was really funny
The Violent Tomboy chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
Trenchcoatgirl-Kyo chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
Oh. My. God. That was really funny in a horrible way... nice!
ReviewerWriter chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
“Doesn’t matter. I’m sure that nothing really bad has happened.”

ROLF! That was great! What a well-thought of idea!

Great job.
A.D. Williams chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
This story had me rolling laughing! I felt most sorry for the man who was trying to find the herb to heal his village. It wasn't so much that the mountain wasn't there, but the way you put it! Write another chapter! I'll be waiting! Till next time,



I too like to write humorous fanfics. I have one called Nuisance Company (my only story!) please read it and tell me what you think! Bye!
Hououza chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
Excellent story.

An interesting thought, it's almost suprising that half of future Japan isn't a wasteland considering all the damagethey did to it in the past...

Good luck & best wishes,

Lou chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
*gigglegigglesnicker* It has to be true! *happy sigh* I love irony...