|Reviews for What makes me whole|
| TsukiyomiMoon chapter 16 . 5/7/2010
No! It can't be the end! I hope there is more to come and I love your story.
| anotherthrowawayname chapter 17 . 4/9/2007
That was a sudden transition, from "I hope you have a long time to hear this" (at the end of chapter 16) to "She was too late. Sora was already there, with an accomplice too." (at the beginning of this chapter) I don't really understand what happened... anyways good story, hope you'll make a sequel.
| Tera Earth chapter 17 . 4/8/2007
so...thats the end? He is dead, and she is alone without him. There is nothing else?
| Gone and not returning chapter 16 . 4/5/2007
I like the ending _ it was sweet and it made me smile. Good job with finishing an awesome fic!
| Carmen Willious Dorman chapter 16 . 4/5/2007
Aww, and that's the end? Poo.
| Nullus chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Interesting...i like this story...
| waddedpaper1292 chapter 16 . 3/7/2007
the end? *eye twitches, drops to knees* NO! jk!
| kris126 chapter 16 . 3/2/2007
uh-oh. Gina's in trouble with her family, isn't she?
*throws cookies to you for all sixteen wonderful chapters!*
please update soon!
| anotherthrowawayname chapter 16 . 3/1/2007
FINALLY AN UPDATE
Oh, I changed my penname since you last posted. I was formerly Jarkobubbles84. New name, new review. Here you go, post again soon please!
| Gone and not returning chapter 15 . 1/12/2007
Sexy and sweet . I love this chapter *chuckles* Your good when it comes to hot scenes P update ASAYC!
| Gone and not returning chapter 14 . 1/12/2007
I'm surprised that Saix didn't try to kill Gina again XD. You spelled heard wrong but that was the only mistake that caught my eye. Nice work so far!
| Gone and not returning chapter 13 . 1/12/2007
Wow, Saix sure likes to try Xemnas' patience XD something tells me he didn't learn his lesson.
So Gina finally meets Xaldin, interesting. The story only gets better. And moving on...
| Gone and not returning chapter 12 . 1/12/2007
I'm back _ remember me? If not, it's ok. This chapter was pretty short but sweet. I like it!
| Carmen Willious Dorman chapter 15 . 12/3/2006
I loved the last bit you threw in there. :D
| Carmen Willious Dorman chapter 11 . 12/3/2006
Aw, that's sweet.
So Xemnas does care.
But is she important in some way...?