|Reviews for In The Belly Of The Whale|
| xxXAmarantaXxx chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Very realistic and awesome
| Lonely Moon chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
Cute, touching, and very good. What more is there to say? I have nothing negative to say. I really enjoyed it. The characters where portrayed well and the story flowed nicely. Every thing was in order. Definately one to read again.
| CatNap chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
aww man.. now I'm all mushy and teary eyed...
| jeanenjolras chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
That was really sweet.
| Kousuke chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
OMG! I loved it so much! It was so frikkin adorable .
| Tihmm chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
This was a great story. Perfectly fitting the personalities of the two characters-entirely believable. It was wonderfully written and well put together. In other words: I LOVED IT!
| TigStripe chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
What a nostalgic story. I really enjoyed it. The last spoken line was awesome..."Now the score's a million to one." Such memory. Not make-me-cry emotional, but stronger than a lot of stories I read on ff. I don't think that it started strong and got weaker as you continued it; I think it started strong and picked up strength as the two confronted each other.
This answered a few questions that I probably had at one point or another, whether or not Riku was still jealous of Sora or if Sora was still untrusting of Riku. I'm glad you addressed these issues.
It was really well done, but alas, spell check did its job correctly (the only mistakes I saw were ones that spellcheck wouldn't have caught, like "he" instead of "the" or "old" instead of "hold". It's always a good idea to read over your story yourself, not relying on spellcheck.)
| Hannah chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
Does this really have to be a oneshot? It's so good! Honestly, I was expecting it to get hot and heavy for a bit, but that would be too predictable. However much time it took, it turned out great! Still, just a oneshot?
| Sekre chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
Great job! I really liked it ... Its nice to see some post KHII stories out there, since like 90 percent of the fics are AU - not that its bad, but fics that tie into the game are refreashing every once and awhile.
Well anyhoo, nice oneshot - perhaps one day when you have a chance you could go over it and fix some errors .. I saw a few random letters in between the words, but nothing noticable really.
| Katraa chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
That was really good _ Few typos but I didn't mind (I always have typos, for I am the queen of them. A yup) I really liked everything about it and how cute Riku was in it (I love Angst!Riku so much). hehe twas really good. Make another, neh?