|Reviews for The Accident|
| TheButtercupPrincess chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
wow I love it please update
| CasperxDaisyxRa chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
That was sad. :(
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I love it plesse updste
| SpongeBobCheddarPants chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
Great story, but very sad. can't wait till you write more. Please do soon!
| Anoymous chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Some parts are questionable but very good start. You have definitely hooked me to seeing the next chapter!
| Message at the Dawn chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Considering it's so short right now, this is actually rather impressive. ) I hope to see more of this story soon! _
| EL CHUPACABRA chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
I like the start. Dr. Whoever huh; nice touch. You reeled me in here, so I hope you're going to continue this. It's a good story so far, and it has potential. I just wonder what are you going to do next in the next chapter?
| Hellerick Ferlibay chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
' "You know, his skin was the exact same color as the pavement." Arnold choked out a laugh.' - why Arnold laughs here? That sounds kinda creepy. And it's difficult to believe that Gerald would act in such stupid way in that situation. And how is happened that Arnold narrated his story to Helga and Phoebe? The questions, questions... Well, I hope I'll know more later.
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
Pretty good start! Actually, Arnold would be the one trying to get the police's attention, since Gerald, even if not a coward, thinks a lot more about helping people than Arnold.
Keep the good writing.
| qwerasdfg chapter 1 . 5/10/2006
Good storyline... I hope you update soon!