finally caught up and I was overthinking along jazz damn

What did clockwork show her?

ohmygod

I'm scared to read this chapter Dan has been working so hard and I can already see what's bound to be said to him if he got involved

BOXY U DUMB BISH

idk how to feel about Dan not even wanting to visit his son isjfidkjsdi

YOU OMG THE CHARACTERIZATION! just *chef kiss* that's exactly their line of thinking and the dialogues! gaaaahhhh I could kiss u rn no homo tho

she's so strong fr

IVE HAD MY SUSPICIONS BUT OH MY GOD

OYFUCKING GOD WHAT OMG? HELLOMMMM idk why I didn't read this sooner BUT PLEASE THE TWISTS

I know the chances are slim to to none, but I love this story and wish it were finished! The detail you put into it, the characters, the emotion, it’s overwhelmingly incredible! And I wanna know what Clockwork showed Jazz! And wanna see Sam and Danny happy so bad. But thanks for this story, i love it

Just wanted to let you know how much I'm loving this. I only came across it recently, and I ended up binge-reading the story within a few days. As much as I love the plot, I'm most captivated by how you've handled the characters. Usually in multiple POV fics, there'll be one or two characters I care about more, and I'll focus on their stories and skim the rest. Here, they're all interesting.

Very well-done. Thanks for the brilliant fic.

I can't believe it's been years since the last time I read a DP fic, and more incredible is the fact that, when I started reading this from the begining since your resurection, I find myself still smiling and getting excited like an idiot. Now I remember why this was my favorite story and why it was so frustrating when the hiatus was a fact. Sadly, the responsible adult that I'm now can't run to read and review the instant a chapter comes to my mail, ergo my delayed comment.
A lot to say! The meeting with Tucker was one of the things I was dying to see. So far he's been the more distant from the Dan that Sam and Jazz -even Danny, to some extent- know. I am surprised of the way Tucker decided to resolve the situation, and I think he must be really angry because what he did wasn't intelligent at all. He tried to take one of the most powerfuls ghosts in the world by himself, totally alone! What was he thinking? What make him think that he could trap Dan in the thermos? To be honest, I would had liked to see Tucker doing something more clever, maybe even getting to catch Dan, but in othe hand the fact that he took his cell with him with the conversation with Dan opens the posibility of him hearing it, alone, with cold head, and then having his conceptions shattered -hell, yes! And there is a thing I really love it in that chapter: the fact that Tucker was the one confronting Dan, directly; so far it had been the opposite, Dan trying to contact his loved ones. But not with Tucker. And another thing that made me open my eyes like plates was when he calls Dan a rapist and a murderer! It's true and of course he has very good reasons for not trusting Dan but still, it was intense! Way to go, Tuck! I was a little dissapointed that he didn't appeared in this chapter, btw, I hope we can see him soon. He seemed very shaken but I'm not sure about what -his reckless decision? What Dan told him about him and Vlad? I need to know!
I'm surprised to see that Sam's mom wants to see her married with Danny so soon! I mean, she's traditionalist and all but they're really young. And Sam didn't take therapy, not that her mom can know that but still, the idea of being naked in front of somebody, specially Danny, must be terrible.
Is nice to see that at least Dan is not alone in his not life. It was sweet to see Vlad worried about Danny's sad mood. But that conversation remind me that we really don't know how it was for Vlad to deal with his powers. As Sam said Danny had his friends but Vlad was totally alone, trying to understand something that wasn't his field of knowledge in the first place. That little peak in his past leave me wanting more ;)
Now, the question I've had since eons ago: are you planning on having Clockwork and Vlad in a conversation? A chat between those two written by you would be like making a dream come true! Seriously, you totally have to think about it! :D
Well, that's it, work calls. I hope you update soon? And by soon I mean in this life? Not that I'm trying to make you feel guilty or anything! :3
See ya!

I enjoyed the last two chapters a lot! X3

I- I did it! I finished it! And you've updated it too! I thought I was going crazy when chapters went up from 34 to 35.

Welp, this was an excellent time I've had. I've gotten absolutely no shit done at my house, as a result, but it was still time well spent. I had forgotten a great deal apparently, about the story, and am glad I sat down to reread it. Somehow I had even considered this story and the scene where Jazz meets Clockwork, to be from completely different fics. Now I don't have to futilely dig through the archives to find it. lol

Ha, Danny now has a deadline for proposing to Sam. This is great. :D A good writing device too since that means Danny's going to really have to step up his game. Things are getting very interesting right now.