Reviews for Servare Vitas
Scarlet Scully chapter 19 . 9/3/2007
I've been completely hooked by this fic... unfortunately, I've given myself a cliffhanger by reading this far and having to go now without being able to read any further. Fortunately, I found this story after it's completed so I won't have to wait as long as the other readers had to. Time constraints prevent me from reviewing more thoroughly, but I promise to be more in depth when I come back to finish.

Great story/romance/suspense so far.
warmfuzzys chapter 41 . 8/30/2007
wow what a mamouth effort that was brilliant I hope you write more multi chapter stories sand that is finished. May be a sequel? please
ames chapter 6 . 8/18/2007
I am enjoying this a lot, but now that it's no longer a WIP, it really should be edited down to fewer chapters. It would flow much better with longer sections, and good subtle editing would keep the suspense. I also find that clicking from chapter to chapter pulls me out of the story.

- ames
teresab313 chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
This was an excellent story! I stayed up until 3:00 am reading the whole thing, including the alternate ending, which only game two hours of sleep before tackling a very busy work day (with swollen eyelids from crying).

I laughed and I cried, and I held my breath, and my blood pressure rose and my heart was pounding, and what can I say... Wow!

I appreciate the amount of research you did on a variety of things. It showed in a good way.

The only thing I wasn't too fond of was the excrutiating detail in some areas like the guns, shooting techniques, etc. I guess I'm a Tessa, not interested in those things.

I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Lisa Paris chapter 41 . 6/29/2007
Really great fic. What can I say that hasn't already been said?

I thought you nailed Booth most excellently - Brennan was pretty good most of the time - maybe just a little too 'girly' on occasion, but hey, I'm clutching at straws here, because on the whole, she was great.

Loved the action sequences - heart in mouth stuff all the way. Research and finite detailing makes it all seem so much more real.

Basically - I just loved this. Really hope you're writing more.
Leena7 chapter 39 . 6/20/2007
THANK GOD!
techgurl chapter 41 . 5/25/2007
I have this story on my list-of-ff-to-read for a while now and finally I read it. What can I say besides it's really great.

At first I thought it was just another story, but at one point, it just became so real. And with all the references and pics on LJ.

You did a great job in it.
LucindaC chapter 24 . 5/25/2007
End of chapter 23 and you so have me crying! Really I am blown away and could read this all day. Only have time for like 2 more chapters. I do editing and research for novels and screenplays. Im working on a second run at a screenplay that is getting some good reception at Cannes for one of my authors and it is nowhere as good as this. I hate to have to go read anything else!
LucindaC chapter 20 . 5/25/2007
Going on to Chpt 21! - Awsome scenes from 17-20. I think you have kept Booth in character very well. His thoughts while setting up and taking the shot. Right on! Extremley well done! The research you have done is also amazing.
LucindaC chapter 17 . 5/25/2007
I am on chapter 17 and really loving this story. I had to go read your bio to be sure, but it is so cool to read from a man's perspective! You have done really well with the female aspects as well. I love all the detailed information about weapons and am very impressed you do not have a military or FBI background. At this point I strongly suggest you submit some of your work to a publishing house. Print it out and send it in. No harm no foul! Let me know if you need help with a copyright before hand. You may have to change the names in this one unless Reichts will give you permission. On to chapter 18!
Lightning Lindy chapter 41 . 5/20/2007
Hey it's me again. I finally finished. I love love how this ended. Zack is such a dork. And B/B is the bomb
bb-4ever chapter 41 . 5/20/2007
hi me again. I've got to the and wow. still a great story. nearly screamed when she let him break down in the hospital and just stared at him - how cold! - no matter how scared she was she shouldn't have done that he'd been through too much to have to go through that.

glad she went back after he told her to leave and everything was ok in the end.

the ending did seem a bit dissapointing just leaving them in hospital and the guys at the lab as if nothing had happened.

enjoyed the whole fic. just printed off the changes you've done - look forward to reading them too and I'll try and review.

thanks for a great fic
bb-4ever chapter 2 . 5/19/2007
hi just thought I'd give another review. I don't know how many chapters I'm in but booth's shot loads of bad guys (8 I think in 17 seconds) hes got into the Jeffasonian, found bones and angela kissed bones then left them to go back to the lab and is on his way to the bad guys.

I must say wow! I've not read a fic with so much details, emotional turmoil and action in it. this I think has to be my most favourite fic yet. part of me doesn't want it to end because its so great but the most part of me wants to see that bones and booth make it out and get together.

I'm rather worried about booth this is really gonna affect him, his number 43 has already risen how much higher will it get before he's through.

btw love bones thought about how hot booth looked with all his weapons on - trust guns to turn bones on!

I'll review again soon. great work thanks for an excellent read - sorry I'm not reviewing after each chapter but as i said before I've printed this fic off (otherwise it would take me forever to read it- don't get much pc time).

thanks again

bb-4ever
bb-4ever chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
hi

Im reading this story off line so not sure how many chapters I've actually read but. how many guns does Booth have or need?

glad that booths "replacement" didn't last long - didn't want him to turn into another sully - don't think booth would have handled that to well.

this is a great fic so far bones and booth are getting so much closer the shooting range is a great idea. love the way booth talked about his family history using guns.

hope booth does tell her how he feels they both need each other so much.

look forward to reading more and will pop back and review again,

thanks again for the good read
Essie-molessie chapter 41 . 5/16/2007
To date this is one of the most well written fan fiction's I've ever read and I've read many. I never review but i was compelled to let you know, that you're a talented writer and that you should keep up the great work. I can only imagine the amount of research that it took to make this be so authentic. Thank you for taking the time out to figure it all out because as a reader I completely appreciated it. I just want you to know that you've done an amazing job.
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