|Reviews for Never Ending Love|
| Nesha chapter 19 . 7/18/2009
This is great
| DELETED I DO NOT USE THIS chapter 19 . 1/11/2009
Wow, that was good, plz write more... :)
| fourthofjuly1996 chapter 5 . 8/16/2008
Again, plot is good. You need to work on spelling and grammar. and one thing made me laugh. you put 'Are you crying SWEATY?' it made me laugh. ok, I'll shut up now.
| fourthofjuly1996 chapter 3 . 8/16/2008
Good, but you need to work on vocab. and grammar.
| rosewolf44 chapter 19 . 7/21/2008
you r the best writer i have read so far and you have 2 update son
| LaVieBoheme76 chapter 12 . 5/20/2008
I love it! But just one tip: make sure that you are spelling the right word. For instance: to, too and two. They sound the same but they all have different meanings. When you use the wrong word it slows down the reader's comprehension and takes them out of the story a little bit because they have to decipher what you mean instead of just concentrating on the emotions and plot of the story. Sorry that's just been bugging me for the whole story so far. Other than that it's phenomenal so update soon!
| EdwardlovesErica chapter 19 . 2/28/2008
That was realy good!
But the was Awierd place to end the story!
Is there going to be a sequal?
| Blue eyed vampwolf chapter 8 . 11/30/2007
do you know that you put "Swam" instead of Swan on the third to last sentence?
| fpcj chapter 19 . 4/14/2007
| savanah13 chapter 19 . 4/7/2007
this is great! please update soon i cant wait to read more.
| Charlotte Cullen chapter 8 . 2/4/2007
this is an amazing story I love it!
| anonymous chapter 10 . 2/1/2007
this is me crying and saking my shirt. It is so sweet i cant wait for more from you!
| hurrrrypotterr chapter 10 . 12/22/2006
i got ELIZABETH swan confused with bella.
wow do i feel like an idiot.
I WITHDRAW MY LAST COMMENT.
good story though :]
| hurrrrypotterr chapter 6 . 12/20/2006
why'd you call her isabella swan?
i think you got a bit confused, this is twilight not pirates of the carribean.
| pinkfroggy chapter 18 . 11/20/2006
PLEASE UPDATE SOON..ABSALOUTLEY AWESOME STORY :D