|Reviews for Rewrite|
| Frosty Abyss chapter 5 . 7/21
This reminded me how much I despise 2003 ver,
| Jill chapter 1 . 1/19
i come back and reread this all the time. its genuinely funny. i think besides that last "dammit" (perfect ending haha) the other line that had me dying was "thus democracy was served" but honestly this whole fic is hilarious. thanks for sharing something this amazing with everyone!
| tati1 chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
This is /funny/. I never thought of breaking the Fourth Wall like this, especially with FMA...
| TimeSeerStudios chapter 5 . 11/16/2013
That was absolutely fantastic. I was laughing uncontrollably during the entire thing, no joke. Ha, if only there was an animator that would actually make all the on-screen parts just for the hilarity of how confusing it would actually be to watch... Well aside from the fourteen hour flashback LOL That ending was fabulous too, and Benson was downright hilarious... XD It's rather understandable why he'd want some screen-time, since the poor guy only got like 10 minutes as it was. Well, at least he didn't get blown up this time, eh? Anyway, that was a fun read and the idea was very interesting.
| Mahade Crawford chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
Can I write a companion story of just consisting of the onscene parts?
| ShadowLDrago chapter 5 . 3/22/2013
LOL! This was wierd, not sure if I like this or the orignal FMA script better... Oh well
| FarGreenCountrySwiftSunrise chapter 5 . 12/23/2012
This is the most crack-tastic thing I have ever read. Brilliant.
| nosrepa chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
"Shocked silence flew around the table several times before hitting a tree and dying an ignominious death."
That's literally the best sentence ever written. You rock
| queenusagi chapter 5 . 10/4/2012
I couldn't stop laughing oh my god.
| sapphireswimming chapter 5 . 9/7/2012
Hahahahahahahahahahahaha. Thank you so much for writing this. I needed some good crack. And this was the best.
| sapphireswimming chapter 4 . 9/7/2012
HEHE. Is there any chance that I'm adopted?
The universe hates me.
Start the mindless chanting!
This is so funny. XD
| sapphireswimming chapter 3 . 9/7/2012
Aha, yes. *wipes tear*
| sapphireswimming chapter 2 . 9/7/2012
Haha. The who what wwhere why when passages ending in wrenches were very funny. As were the flashbacks. XD
| sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Aha, this is pretty hilarious. I like the idea a lot and you use the perfect phrases to convey just how breaking the fourth wall this is.
| DarkestTruth chapter 1 . 9/4/2012