|Reviews for Xwing: Betrayal|
| gizmo1204 chapter 2 . 1/22/2012
I know I'm late to the party, but this story is amazing and I'm dying to find out what happens to Wes. Will you be finishing/continuing?
| Agent ERA chapter 19 . 10/30/2011
Gosh, what a terrible ending! Aghh, please update sooon...
| Sachita chapter 19 . 12/3/2010
Hi! I dearly hope you manage to update the story soon again (-: It's wonderfully-written and it's so rare to find fics about the Rogues. I am not sure how I could have missed this story of yours because it's really fabulous. And oh, Hobbie, he's in for a dressing down! I loved the line with the "mating rituals" and Hobbie's reaction to it.
Please update this great story soon again! You would make my day.
Have a great weekend,
| Nikara chapter 19 . 7/25/2010
These stories are great! I hope that you continue writing them- you've got the characterization down, and I desperately need to know what is going on in that first chapter!
| Demon28 chapter 7 . 11/24/2009
Oh Wow! You've continued this story! I had just about given up on an update. I loved "X-Wing Ambush" and started reading this one but there was no update!
"Snoopy Dance" in process!
I've got alot of reading to catch up on the story. Don't know how I missed this update!
Will write more later; have to go feed the cats!
YEAH an update!
| Elleira chapter 4 . 3/7/2009
I absolutely adore your characterization of the Rogues! I hope you start updating again, because after just rereading X-wing: Ambush, I'm really craving some awesome Rogue action!
| Rebel.Dream.Tatooine.Ghost chapter 4 . 2/19/2008
| Reo chapter 4 . 8/4/2007
Ack! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! There are very few good Rogue Squadron stories out there, and yours are fantastic! Please don't leave us all hanging! You're incredible at keeping the Rogues in character. I've tried my hand numerous times at Wedge fics and Rogue fics, and they never come off right. So keep going! I've been a fan of "Retribution" for years, and I'm glad there's this sequel to "Ambush." Don't stop!
I saw that there hasn't been a review in months, so I hope you'll get this review in your inbox and get back to writing! :)
| Jet chapter 4 . 9/11/2006
Just wanted to stop in and say that I like the way this is starting out. I read Ambush over at your website and I thought it was very well done. I love your style and I think you did a great job of fleshing out Iris Bailey's wonderful storyline. I can't tell you how excited I am that I found another "novel" in the works by you. Please keep at it. :) I'd love to see how this turns out!
| Rogue SG-1 chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
i've been looking forward to your next story, glad to find it. good start, when are you updating?
| Manie chapter 4 . 7/13/2006
I just want to tell you that I love the way you writte. So, I have to admit that I don't love Ajene so much that in "Ambush" (and I'm a "Wedge love Iella" fan, really).
This fic is great and I'm looking forward your early update.
| otahyoni chapter 4 . 6/5/2006
Finally getting around to reading the new chapter.
I like that Wedge didn't just bounce back from his Ambush ordeal. Makes it more real. Are we going to see Heblon? Probably not, as it'd probably take some story acrobatics to fit him in, but it'd be fun.
Keep it comin'! :)
| otahyoni chapter 3 . 5/17/2006
That's not nearly big or excited-looking enough to express my glee at Betrayal up and ready for reading. I absolutely cannot wait for this to take off and leave me on the edge of my seat. ESPECIALLY IF YOU'RE KILLING HOBBIE AND WES. Evil, evil prologue. LOVE IT.
I need to pop over to Shatterstar now and see what's new. I haven't had time since I got the latest update. :)
| Super Tinfoil Man Part 2 chapter 3 . 5/12/2006
Great stuff , the start scared me as there seemed to be hundreds of names to look at and remember , it was a good story though.