Reviews for Gone?
gweaz chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
Wow, that was excellent! Very touching, especially the captain. I can't wait to see what happens next! Gread job.
tamasit1 chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
Great start, I really want to read more.
colonelheather chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
I LOVE it. I can't wait for you to update. It's off to a great start.
xfreelifex chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
Ooh...interesting start. I love WPP stories!

A couple minor things...make sure to reread your story before you post. You made a couple tiny errors where you have "gave" instead of "grave" and "if" instead of "in"...just things like that.

But your plot is looking really good. You write wonderfully - you almost made me cry. It's just so sad! Oh, and did you notice your headline was practically identical to the one on the magazine when Alex "died"? LOL

Update soon, please!

Color Esperanza
BensonStablerFan2006 chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
awe, this will be a great story! I cant wait for an update! The part where Liv came and got the ring was sweet. so Elliot knows that she isnt dead?
mariskaandchris chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
nice
Svu Cutie chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
WOW how terribly sad is that. Please tell me she comes back shortly wearing his ring. They need to be together. Update soon!
AntisocialButterfly13 chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
SO sad! My eyes are glistening! Update soon!
LivChic chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
wow
onetreefan chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
oh my gosh! i hope there is more to come! i really liked it! poor elliot! i love this. i hope she comes to him soon! :-)

huge fan of EOness!

onetreefan
KaydenceRei chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
I like it, seems interesting! Sometimes these Witness Protection things can be so great!

I can't wait to see where you take your story next, and I hope that you get to update soon.

Very well written, great job.

-Kay
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